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Check in by: 12-16-05 at 05:51 PM

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Apo Kold has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-05 04:54 PM.

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-05 04:54 PM.

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Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne.
& you know what is wack G aside from your shitty flow..
..Is only coming top 8 & being proud of poetry months ago.
So now I fathered this hoe.. All his LL lovers can morn..
..& like cruel benefit personnel.. You can laugh at his poor form.

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Voted For: Apostrophe

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Voted For: Apostrophe

Apostrophe:

Only 15 Posts On Rapverse.. You already need to Retire..
&& Hop Off The Board...Like Some Washed Up Divers...
^^alright bar good meta decent opener 6/10
Im Telling U I'll Beat U.. Cause Kid Your The Worst..
and I'll Keep My Word.. Much Like You'll Keep My Verse
^^lol ok 4/10
You're Drop Cant Hurt Me, Cause Son Your A Pansy....
Cause in 1 line i'll crunch bars.. and I'm Not A Fan of Candy
^^good meta nice bar 7/10
I Got Confidence I'll Win.. Cause I Know This Dude Is Weak..
Cuz.. No One Would Talk About Apo Kold..
...................................Unless I Went On A Losing Streak..
^^good closer nice meta and punch 7/10

Overall: 24/40 (60%)


Apo Kold:

Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
^^whats with all the soundclick punches ive seen lately still a good bar but damn 6/10
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne.
^^ehh 5/10
& you know what is wack G aside from your shitty flow..
..Is only coming top 8 & being proud of poetry months ago.
^^ooooooooook 6/10
So now I fathered this hoe.. All his LL lovers can morn..
..& like cruel benefit personnel.. You can laugh at his poor form
^^decent meta ok closer 6/10

Overall: 23/40 (58%)


Damn close battle but i gotta say apos pulled this one out barely... work on that damn structure tho stop making the words all gigantic and shit.


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Voted For: Apo Kold

Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne

Vs
You're Drop Cant Hurt Me, Cause Son Your A Pansy....
Cause in 1 line i'll crunch bars.. and I'm Not A Fan of Candy

Pretty close battle, not bad.

Apo Kold had the two punches i liked when apost only had one.

V.Apo kold

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Voted For: Apostrophe

Apostrophe:
Only 15 Posts On Rapverse.. You already need to Retire..
&& Hop Off The Board...Like Some Washed Up Divers..
4/10 - ok punch.
Im Telling U I'll Beat U.. Cause Kid Your The Worst..
and I'll Keep My Word.. Much Like You'll Keep My Verse
6/10 - Good Punch.
You're Drop Cant Hurt Me, Cause Son Your A Pansy....
Cause in 1 line i'll crunch bars.. and I'm Not A Fan of Candy
4/10 - ok wordplay.
I Got Confidence I'll Win.. Cause I Know This Dude Is Weak..
Cuz.. No One Would Talk About Apo Kold..
...................................Unless I Went On A Losing Streak..
6/10 - niice bar.
20/40

You had a good flow, some good personals, and you used good wordplay.


Apo Kold:
Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
4/10 - kinda played.
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne.
5/10 - good diss.
& you know what is wack G aside from your shitty flow..
..Is only coming top 8 & being proud of poetry months ago.
4/10 - ok personal.
So now I fathered this hoe.. All his LL lovers can morn..
..& like cruel benefit personnel.. You can laugh at his poor form.
5/10 - ok closer
18/40

You had a good flow, started off pretty stong, had good personals, and strong punches.

Vote - apostr

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Voted For: Apo Kold

Close Battle

Apostrophe

Only 15 Posts On Rapverse.. You already need to Retire..
&& Hop Off The Board...Like Some Washed Up Divers..
- Decent opener
Im Telling U I'll Beat U.. Cause Kid Your The Worst..
and I'll Keep My Word.. Much Like You'll Keep My Verse
- Nice line again...
You're Drop Cant Hurt Me, Cause Son Your A Pansy....
Cause in 1 line i'll crunch bars.. and I'm Not A Fan of Candy
- Nah...
I Got Confidence I'll Win.. Cause I Know This Dude Is Weak..
Cuz.. No One Would Talk About Apo Kold..
...................................Unless I Went On A Losing Streak..
- Not bad...

Good verse, and consistent as well...flow was good too, and you worded your lines nice


Apo Kold

Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
- Great opener...funny
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne.
- Decent enough
& you know what is wack G aside from your shitty flow..
..Is only coming top 8 & being proud of poetry months ago.
- Decent personal
So now I fathered this hoe.. All his LL lovers can morn..
..& like cruel benefit personnel.. You can laugh at his poor form.
- Could have made it better, but not bad...

Good verse here too...nice opener, could have worded some lines better...but it was all directed at the opponent, and you did it well with some personals too...flow was fine too...

This was a good battle, both came pretty good....and it was very close too - I just feel that Apo Kold edged it, though there was not much between both...and I am sure Apostrophe could have come stronger and not keyed it if he knew what level Apo was at...but on the two verses here...

Vote - Apo Kold

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Voted For: Apo Kold

Only 15 Posts On Rapverse.. You already need to Retire..
&& Hop Off The Board...Like Some Washed Up Divers..
Ehh ight opener 6/10
Im Telling U I'll Beat U.. Cause Kid Your The Worst..
and I'll Keep My Word.. Much Like You'll Keep My Verse
kinda ight not a very good ines 5/10
You're Drop Cant Hurt Me, Cause Son Your A Pansy....
Cause in 1 line i'll crunch bars.. and I'm Not A Fan of Candy
lmao this was funny nice punch kinda witty 7/10
I Got Confidence I'll Win.. Cause I Know This Dude Is Weak..
Cuz.. No One Would Talk About Apo Kold..
...................................Unless I Went On A Losing Streak..
kk nice closer and good punch 6.5/10

Overall: your verse was actually pretty good some nice punches. ya flowwas very good in there good structure. didn't like your personals and the starting of ya opener. Don't judge posts.

Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
Lmao nice personal and goos starter 7/10
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne.
It would be iight... i'm not feeling this though 5/10
& you know what is wack G aside from your shitty flow..
..Is only coming top 8 & being proud of poetry months ago.
hmmmm.... no... maybe... 6/10
So now I fathered this hoe.. All his LL lovers can morn..
..& like cruel benefit personnel.. You can laugh at his poor form.
This was a good clser nice punch 7.5/10

overall you had a fairly weak verse and reading your other others...you couldve done better... well you havn't been on here for a long time. the personals was pretty funny the opener had me ROFLing.

Apo: 25.5/40
Apostro: 24.5/40
V/apo

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Voted For: Apostrophe

Arisen from the dead.. Apo is back to pound shit..
If you think that sounds bad..? Check ’phe’s fukkin sound click.
^^^Good personal opener
I’m pretty pist I found it .. Below par? Well not exactly..
..in fact it had so many weak spots you’d consider it had acne.
^^^Ight
& you know what is wack G aside from your shitty flow..
..Is only coming top 8 & being proud of poetry months ago.
^^^Weak
So now I fathered this hoe.. All his LL lovers can morn..
..& like cruel benefit personnel.. You can laugh at his poor form.
^^^weak closer

Only 15 Posts On Rapverse.. You already need to Retire..
&& Hop Off The Board...Like Some Washed Up Divers..
^^^Good opener
Im Telling U I'll Beat U.. Cause Kid Your The Worst..
and I'll Keep My Word.. Much Like You'll Keep My Verse
^^^ight
You're Drop Cant Hurt Me, Cause Son Your A Pansy....
Cause in 1 line i'll crunch bars.. and I'm Not A Fan of Candy
^^^Lol nice
I Got Confidence I'll Win.. Cause I Know This Dude Is Weak..
Cuz.. No One Would Talk About Apo Kold..
...................................Unless I Went On A Losing Streak..
^^^Hot closer

This was an ight battle both came wit it....apo kold....u came wit some good lines but some were weak no hate but they were played...apost u came wit a good solid verse wit consistent punchs that were fresh....V/apostrophe.....RTF

Voted For: Apostrophe

apostraphe definately made me laugh more and his punches were simeple but good. this was a good battle, ncie verses from both of you