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Funda-Mentalz 5 83.33%
24 karat 1 16.67%
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Old 08-21-03, 03:52 PM   #1
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Funda-Mentalz vs 24 Karat

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5 bars..
no bitin
no feedin
no dr
no hate
no prewrite
Dont matta who spit first
deadline... Friday Midnight

aight
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Old 08-21-03, 04:52 PM   #2
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This is what you get for challenging me...

Aight yo, battle me? Dawg you must be on "crack"/
"Drugs" Bunny called, he wants his 24 carrots back!

Your name is 24 karat, and you still dont rap "golden"/
Your gettin lyrically "flushed", I'm callin' your "bluff" and you're foldin!

Just warmin up...

24 karat?? WOW that's almost as thick as your head/
Change your name to "Flatline" 'cause you're fuckin dead...

I can see why you rep that crew....'cause your a fuckin joke/(check his sig)
You get "takin out" by my "deck" because we're playin CHOKE/(card game)

ANNND It's Over

You made the deadline friday NIGHT because you needed to think it through your mind to avoid a PRE-WRITE/
Im higher then you in this rap game, because your just the "joker" but I am a "knight"...

peace.
 
Old 08-21-03, 05:50 PM   #3
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Your rhymes blow harder then prositutes in a alley//
Im endin this battle faster then the Waynes Bros finale// (they didnt have a finale)

You dont have any skillz... I'll kick yo ass like Chris Farely did in Beverly Hillz//
I have u undaground eating worms and mud like rugrats Lil and Phil//

Your rhymes cant fuck wit me... Im killin this fruity bitch like he was hangin from a "BredFruit" Tree//
I'll leave your body washed up along shore of the Carribean Sea//

Afta this battle we're gonna end up on Judge Judy.. you'll ask her for an Insanity Plea// ((criminal law) a plea in which the defendant claims innocence due to mental incompetence at the time)
My rhymes will slam u harder then Wrestlers on WWE..from the highest degree..to the lowest degree//

Tha battle over.. run like u seen three terminators//
Im squashing this herb.. like i was a weed exterminator//
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Old 08-21-03, 06:52 PM   #4
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uppin...this should be an easy desicion in my opinion........................................... ......................
 
Old 08-21-03, 07:46 PM   #5
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uppin this... dont go to sleep on this battle...lets goooo vote vote
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Old 08-21-03, 09:03 PM   #6
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uppin 2... come on peeps please vote on this battle.. it aint that hard to drop a vote please... uppiin numba 2
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Old 08-21-03, 09:19 PM   #7
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Honestly Ya Both Came Pretty Fuckin Weak
But I Gotta Give This To 24 Karat
His Flow Was A Lil Better
Punches Hit A Lil Harder
No Hate Funda-mentals

vote=24 Karat
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Old 08-21-03, 09:42 PM   #8
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VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE VOTE ON THIS DONT GO TO SLEEP.... THIS IS A TYTE GOOD BATTLE... NOW VOTE UPPIN THIS SHIT TO 3
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Old 08-21-03, 10:25 PM   #9
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Mortality.....WHAAAAA? uppin for votes............................................. .........................................
 
Old 08-21-03, 10:39 PM   #10
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honestly, this battle was weak.........i think funda-mentalz got it....and so that there is no confusion or accusation...imma explain it......

Aight yo, battle me? Dawg you must be on "crack"/
"Drugs" Bunny called, he wants his 24 carrots back!

this was decent......could have been worded better, which would have made it a better bar....but decent personal...

Your name is 24 karat, and you still dont rap "golden"/
Your gettin lyrically "flushed", I'm callin' your "bluff" and you're foldin!

first line was decent....second line sucked......should have worded this better too....

24 karat?? WOW that's almost as thick as your head/
Change your name to "Flatline" 'cause you're fuckin dead...

this line was wack as fuck........period....

I can see why you rep that crew....'cause your a fuckin joke/(check his sig)
You get "takin out" by my "deck" because we're playin CHOKE/(card game)

decent first line.......but for the second line..i never heard of choke...lmao

ANNND It's Over

You made the deadline friday NIGHT because you needed to think it through your mind to avoid a PRE-WRITE/
Im higher then you in this rap game, because your just the "joker" but I am a "knight"...

decent closer.....once again could have been worded better....

overall, ya verse was pretty wack.....no multis....punches were minimal.......you get 4/10........

now for karat.........

Your rhymes blow harder then prositutes in a alley//
Im endin this battle faster then the Waynes Bros finale// (they didnt have a finale)

this was wack.......honestly......

You dont have any skillz... I'll kick yo ass like Chris Farely did in Beverly Hillz//
I have u undaground eating worms and mud like rugrats Lil and Phil//

this was wack also....another weak attempt at a punch.....

Your rhymes cant fuck wit me... Im killin this fruity bitch like he was hangin from a "BredFruit" Tree//
I'll leave your body washed up along shore of the Carribean Sea//

another wack attempt at a punch......come on kid......

Afta this battle we're gonna end up on Judge Judy.. you'll ask her for an Insanity Plea// ((criminal law) a plea in which the defendant claims innocence due to mental incompetence at the time)
My rhymes will slam u harder then Wrestlers on WWE..from the highest degree..to the lowest degree//

another weak punch attempt......why would you go on judge judy?.....and what do degrees have to do with getting slammed??....

Tha battle over.. run like u seen three terminators//
Im squashing this herb.. like i was a weed exterminator//

this was the only decent bar you had in the whole battle.......

overall, your verse was wack....you had alot of punch ATTEMPTS...but no good punches at all.......3/10.....

vote=Funda-Mentalz...

any problems with this vote......fuck off...lmao....P C Z
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Old 08-21-03, 10:48 PM   #11
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Man this battle had a lot a refrences to cartoon charcters in here.........Nice Lil Battle nothin really stood out except the "Drugs Bunny" line.........

Punches - Fun
Personals - Fun
Multi's - Tie
Wordplay - Fun
Flow - Fun

Vote = Fund

Honest vote no beef

Ya'll drop a vote on my battle against Divine_Creature

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74807
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Old 08-21-03, 11:05 PM   #12
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AIght no beef or anythang but

I think =FUnd took this wit better punches and wordplay in my prespective

but i cant poll vote just droppin my 2cents!!

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Old 08-21-03, 11:20 PM   #13
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uppin 4...............................
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come on... he only had one good line... not that great of lines.. and vocab...... vote vote
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Old 08-21-03, 11:28 PM   #14
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Imm Im guna have to say Fundamentals he seemed more exsperienced, the hother cat was just Wack, he wouldnt be able to drop if he had 70 year old Nut sacks


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Yo fundamental hit this up dog

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74667
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Old 08-21-03, 11:41 PM   #15
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3rd uppin......dont sleep plz............................................... ....................................
 
 


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