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Old 08-07-05, 01:02 PM   #1
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A Letter to death:-UNF- and L.Veracity
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Gather and Witness grim reaper Characteristics /
You come in many forms its just a Matter of Physics /
Sometimes we Scatter the Image of Immortality, Death we Rather Dismiss It /
But we know Your inevitable and no Patterns Specific /
darkness dreaded, shadows of lives be-headed
death drawing ny as the pain and sorrow fed it
reach out, touch the garment of the bringer of demise
no disguise, within death's red eyes pure evil lies
An while i sit an gaze at this letter i write..fuck it its better i write/
my feelings on a peice of paper in a veteran light/
i know the posters will say theres a bright light after the day/
that we pass and the only true answer is faith//
yet the unknown consumes and holds the best of me
my soul desires to know what's the future to be?
shadows on my window pain, contriving thoughts with no aim
lame brained, gun aimed, nothing's the same
And as ma energy shifts on life shortens the measure seems a bit wrong/
But know that i will conquer you if ma legacy lives on/
I will meet you head on,death you will hear me roar/
until the day that we meet sincerely yours..//
angry emotions released, as to the paper I weep
death's creep got me in it's reach, I can't speak
my life is decreased to but a simple tear from my eye
nothingness surrounds me as I'm left alone to die


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Old 08-07-05, 01:03 PM   #2
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damn thats some nice shit...it'll be much sicker if it was on real audio...
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Old 08-07-05, 01:06 PM   #3
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man real this was sick homie real it was to the point i almost pucked man real....hahaha....thats hope dope it was man i give this OM a 10/10 real....anybody wit on this?!...........bith collaberated great and specific homie.....topic was ill......
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Old 08-07-05, 01:10 PM   #4
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ok im off for vacation so 1 of yall up it upp digity!!!!!!
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Old 08-08-05, 05:52 AM   #5
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up diggity uppidy up im in london!!!!!!
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Old 08-09-05, 12:44 AM   #6
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ayyo get this shti on audio fast 8/10 man keep postin nice multis iight vocab...sick structure that mde if flow off the hook man
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ayyo get this shti on audio fast 8/10 man keep postin nice multis iight vocab...sick structure that mde if flow off the hook man rtf on my links in my sig......1
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thanx 4 da replies so far...didn't really write this to a beat, I'd have to change it up some for it to fit to a beat lol...

glad ya'll feelin' this though ...

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Old 08-12-05, 09:38 PM   #9
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decent lil drop... coulda been more structured with the flow of it but not bad... the topic was consistent but the lines where you guys switched verses shoulda been more in tune with each other... to me it looks like L dropped a vrse...then un dropped a verse... and then y'all just split it up in sections and repieced it... if you read L.v's part by itself woithout UNF you'll see how well it flows... same with UNF... i'd say a 6.7 outta 10

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