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Old 07-14-08, 01:44 AM   #1
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King Solo ( 3 ) vs BigChase ( 3 )

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King Solo vs BigChase

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

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10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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Old 07-14-08, 08:23 AM   #2
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Old 07-14-08, 11:37 AM   #3
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word to the fudge.



this kid can’t win fairly.. been breaking rules, he’s wrong..
so if we see Big pimpin’… it’s coz he’s biting Jay-Z’s song
had to use jack’s pic to clown him, well.. if I used urs it’d be wild
coz they say the picture tells a story – of a broke ass crack whores child
fo’real though dude, I’m kiddin.. ur life is truly beast son
shit, if wolves come out for a full moon..
..what kind of creature comes out for a keith one?
but ya should’ve seen the letters that came in when I said u’d be winnin
there was some ROFLZ, a few LMFAO’s & an OMFG you gotta be kiddin
& you ‘n ur boys handle the smoke.. kid, get back to reality
only way you pass the dutch is by way of a technicality
now look, s’like Hey diddle diddle bitch! my nursery rhymes are mean
& the cow jumped over the moon..
..like you & ur girl freestylin’ on a trampoline
ur not champ material, so nameplays are appropriate I felt
coz BigChase is fitting in how it’ll take u forever to get close to the belt
got love for ur country, well ain’t that a noble role
& with patriots like this guy..
..I’m actually NOT surprised they lost the last superbowl
I don’t care that he’s hungry & poor, my punches’ll maim this whore
Coz I got a stake in this battle that he offered to prostitute himself for
ur a raggedy ass fashion victim, I’m not being foolish
but if drainpipes come back into style, at least ur house’ll be the coolest


nice knowing you.
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Old 07-14-08, 10:45 PM   #4
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I signed out lol..
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Old 07-14-08, 11:13 PM   #5
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Old 07-14-08, 11:38 PM   #6
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fine... i will later... like tomorrow after practice
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Old 07-14-08, 11:43 PM   #7
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Thanks man.....my bad on not seein ur sign out until after i posted battles.
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Old 07-15-08, 12:17 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by Lay Fear
Thanks man.....my bad on not seein ur sign out until after i posted battles.


Its alright.. I'll just DQ you from VE lmao kidding
no.. I'll just drop halfheartedly..
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Old 07-15-08, 04:57 AM   #9
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Nicks families poor n hungry, Xmas' is grim for real...no question
But Solo looks to the future - in hopes they dont ask his broke ass for presents
U poor basterd.. u've never seen puss n it just urks this Kings pride
But he'll hold n not show it...but thats only til Keith gets too deep inside
U a broke hoe, livin homeless got ur girl fightin squirls jus to tackle nutts
N ur so poor, u'd probably drool if I told u the bitch had an apple butt
ha ha... shit I assumed that was funny coz Im drunk n givin u a slow death
That verse couldn't alarm if u type'd while sippin mountain Dew.....'CodeRed'
Even though this aint my battle its cool, Its time u put ur gaurd up 'HOE'
N this by no means equals a DQ..I matched ur punches atleast 4 bars ago
Ur not hard or nothing, Ur soft as a dogs lonely shit
N' one hit'll make em 'Lay' flat - but I think 'Fear' would be more appropriate
I think that was a nameplay... but on the wrong person
Coz 'Big' pulled out early...which explains why Nicks hurtin'
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Old 07-16-08, 12:53 AM   #10
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quick quick quick
Solo's a bitch from April to July, December to June
Your name says it all, your the king of only you
you can write what you want, i'll match it word for word
solo complains about gas prices, but is used to self serve
I'ma murk this perv, leave him him sulking and bawlin
you couldn't give him the W even if he was bar Brolin
Grim Reapers calling, smack out his teeth with my pimp ring
I slept with bitches, but I won't wake up with the king
Seen him at a gay bar, King stays away from the babes beside his mom
this Solo ain't gettin Leigh-ed, so he'll have to settle with his Han
Could destroy his rep but instead I'll blow the scene
I thought you were Brandon Jennings..
.. the way Solo's oversea-n
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Old 07-16-08, 06:34 PM   #11
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It must hurt Wordz, to come into a battle you aren't involved in and drop a retaliatory verse (AND YOU FED OFF MY VERSE) and then STILL get smoked.

Vote up hoebagz!!
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Old 07-16-08, 06:53 PM   #12
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this kid can’t win fairly.. been breaking rules, he’s wrong..
so if we see Big pimpin’… it’s coz he’s biting Jay-Z’s song
k.
had to use jack’s pic to clown him, well.. if I used urs it’d be wild
coz they say the picture tells a story – of a broke ass crack whores child
mehh.
fo’real though dude, I’m kiddin.. ur life is truly beast son
shit, if wolves come out for a full moon..
..what kind of creature comes out for a keith one?
na..
but ya should’ve seen the letters that came in when I said u’d be winnin
there was some ROFLZ, a few LMFAO’s & an OMFG you gotta be kiddin
ehh okay.
& you ‘n ur boys handle the smoke.. kid, get back to reality
only way you pass the dutch is by way of a technicality
hahaa.
now look, s’like Hey diddle diddle bitch! my nursery rhymes are mean
& the cow jumped over the moon..
..like you & ur girl freestylin’ on a trampoline
eh.
ur not champ material, so nameplays are appropriate I felt
coz BigChase is fitting in how it’ll take u forever to get close to the belt
lol k.
got love for ur country, well ain’t that a noble role
& with patriots like this guy..
..I’m actually NOT surprised they lost the last superbowl
decent
I don’t care that he’s hungry & poor, my punches’ll maim this whore
Coz I got a stake in this battle that he offered to prostitute himself for
mehh.. k
ur a raggedy ass fashion victim, I’m not being foolish
but if drainpipes come back into style, at least ur house’ll be the coolest
k.

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quick quick quick
Solo's a bitch from April to July, December to June
Your name says it all, your the king of only you
na, bad concept..an worded badly.
you can write what you want, i'll match it word for word
solo complains about gas prices, but is used to self serve
k good concept. coulda been worded better again.
I'ma murk this perv, leave him him sulking and bawlin
you couldn't give him the W even if he was bar Brolin
na. weak
Grim Reapers calling, smack out his teeth with my pimp ring
I slept with bitches, but I won't wake up with the king
no.
Seen him at a gay bar, King stays away from the babes beside his mom
this Solo ain't gettin Leigh-ed, so he'll have to settle with his Han
was that a star wars punch? no.
Could destroy his rep but instead I'll blow the scene
I thought you were Brandon Jennings..
.. the way Solo's oversea-n
weak attempt.

I was bein harsh in my voting, only cuz people need to step it up in the league. Take time on your verses..you have all week. Nick I feel ya kinda rushed yours a bit. I'm pretty sure you knew Keiths abilities..so thats understanding. An then Keith rushed it which gave you an evenn greater advantage, Chase ya gotta work on wording your concepts harsher. Nothin really that great except for that self serve concept.. Nick you had some ups n downs but you had some pretty funny lines in the mix.

v/Nick ez.
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Old 07-16-08, 07:05 PM   #13
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why is it that whatever thread Solo posts in gets fuckin raped by verses? lol let's go.

KingSolo


this kid can’t win fairly.. been breaking rules, he’s wrong..
so if we see Big pimpin’… it’s coz he’s biting Jay-Z’s song

okay. okay.

had to use jack’s pic to clown him, well.. if I used urs it’d be wild
coz they say the picture tells a story – of a broke ass crack whores child

meh.

fo’real though dude, I’m kiddin.. ur life is truly beast son
shit, if wolves come out for a full moon..
..what kind of creature comes out for a keith one?

heh, not bad.

but ya should’ve seen the letters that came in when I said u’d be winnin
there was some ROFLZ, a few LMFAO’s & an OMFG you gotta be kiddin

haha, omg that was good.

& you ‘n ur boys handle the smoke.. kid, get back to reality
only way you pass the dutch is by way of a technicality

nice.

now look, s’like Hey diddle diddle bitch! my nursery rhymes are mean
& the cow jumped over the moon..
..like you & ur girl freestylin’ on a trampoline

nigga i use the nursery rhymes 'round here. haha not bad.

ur not champ material, so nameplays are appropriate I felt
coz BigChase is fitting in how it’ll take u forever to get close to the belt

not bad. not bad.

got love for ur country, well ain’t that a noble role
& with patriots like this guy..
..I’m actually NOT surprised they lost the last superbowl

meh. okay but wording was weird.

I don’t care that he’s hungry & poor, my punches’ll maim this whore
Coz I got a stake in this battle that he offered to prostitute himself for

heh, clever.

ur a raggedy ass fashion victim, I’m not being foolish
but if drainpipes come back into style, at least ur house’ll be the coolest

nah, not the greatest.

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quick quick quick
Solo's a bitch from April to July, December to June
Your name says it all, your the king of only you

okay.

you can write what you want, i'll match it word for word
solo complains about gas prices, but is used to self serve

no.

I'ma murk this perv, leave him him sulking and bawlin
you couldn't give him the W even if he was bar Brolin

huh? what? nah.

Grim Reapers calling, smack out his teeth with my pimp ring
I slept with bitches, but I won't wake up with the king

nah.

Seen him at a gay bar, King stays away from the babes beside his mom
this Solo ain't gettin Leigh-ed, so he'll have to settle with his Han

alright, not bad.

Could destroy his rep but instead I'll blow the scene
I thought you were Brandon Jennings..
.. the way Solo's oversea-n

meh.

Overall: What else is there to say. Solo killed this one. Easily. There were a few punches in there that were meh, but overall it was consistent and strong. Chase just kinda flundered at a low level and never got better. Solo won this easily.

VOTE King Solo
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Old 07-17-08, 01:09 AM   #14
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the W - Brolin line iss...

W is the new Oliver Stone movie.. and Josh Brolin who plays dubya was arrested for bar fighting this week.. who cares.. i signed out quick drop
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Well, to tell the truth I dont think its THAT bad I dont know exactly were you thought I fed either but I dropped coz I thought he wasn't going to and I didn't want it to be the usual no show thing...


this kid can’t win fairly.. been breaking rules, he’s wrong..
so if we see Big pimpin’… it’s coz he’s biting Jay-Z’s song
Booooo at this nameplay... too simple
had to use jack’s pic to clown him, well.. if I used urs it’d be wild
coz they say the picture tells a story – of a broke ass crack whores child
Not sure about the opener.. could be a personal I dont know about it but I didn't like the punch coz it was still a bit simple
fo’real though dude, I’m kiddin.. ur life is truly beast son
shit, if wolves come out for a full moon..
..what kind of creature comes out for a keith one?
I thought this bar was hilareouse and I still laugh every time I read it. Its nicely worded and a good nameplay.
but ya should’ve seen the letters that came in when I said u’d be winnin
there was some ROFLZ, a few LMFAO’s & an OMFG you gotta be kiddin
Didn't like this one at all
& you ‘n ur boys handle the smoke.. kid, get back to reality
only way you pass the dutch is by way of a technicality
I feel like a dumbass right now cos though it sounds nice...I dont really get the punch here
now look, s’like Hey diddle diddle bitch! my nursery rhymes are mean
& the cow jumped over the moon..
..like you & ur girl freestylin’ on a trampoline
This could have been a better punch I think but i liked it
ur not champ material, so nameplays are appropriate I felt
coz BigChase is fitting in how it’ll take u forever to get close to the belt
okish, didn't like the wording
got love for ur country, well ain’t that a noble role
& with patriots like this guy..
..I’m actually NOT surprised they lost the last superbowl
I'll admit an evil laugh came out when i read this one
I don’t care that he’s hungry & poor, my punches’ll maim this whore
Coz I got a stake in this battle that he offered to prostitute himself for
Wow, thats my favorite line of that battle nuff said.
ur a raggedy ass fashion victim, I’m not being foolish
but if drainpipes come back into style, at least ur house’ll be the coolest
straight closer

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Solo's a bitch from April to July, December to June
Your name says it all, your the king of only you
hated this line...every word of it
you can write what you want, i'll match it word for word
solo complains about gas prices, but is used to self serve
terrible wording kept this from being a good punch
I'ma murk this perv, leave him him sulking and bawlin
you couldn't give him the W even if he was bar Brolin
No
Grim Reapers calling, smack out his teeth with my pimp ring
I slept with bitches, but I won't wake up with the king
No
Seen him at a gay bar, King stays away from the babes beside his mom
this Solo ain't gettin Leigh-ed, so he'll have to settle with his Han
Wak
Could destroy his rep but instead I'll blow the scene
I thought you were Brandon Jennings..
.. the way Solo's oversea-n
Never again please

Nick came out with what looks like an average cypher verse for him. I dont really think he tried or may be he is just rusty. He had some comical lines that kept this battle interesting but nothing great. Moon let us down here, ive never seen anything from him but I assume he rushed his verse.....a lot. Your punches were badly worded and some of them werent even actual punches.

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