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Old 04-25-09, 03:00 PM   #16
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the rules clearly state no biting...ie passing off other people's lines as your own

keep laughing your ass off, it won't change the fact you're wack
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Old 04-25-09, 03:18 PM   #17
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1...2...3 and to da 4
Stop runnin in a square nigga go threw da door
This bitch nigga here is one that i won't stress
Because ya feedback sucks and ya lyrics are less
Diepod imma bought to set you up on a bipod
Shoot ya garbage lyrics because they is a liepod (Lie Pod)
I Seen that IP adress plenty of times before
Banned off lets beef, Rap Dogs, and Rap Wars

Don't come at me scammin some shit from eminem
You mideas well bite 50 Cent when i pump ya wit adrenaline

flow is abit off point.didnt like your starting few lines but got better as you carried on.i didnt get the lie pod punch and some others were abit off.but did high light your best bar!

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This kids a dope....
His lines are jokes laced wit hope...
I could snap his frame with a FaceBook poke-
It's not even close...Like Mike Vick your Half-Way...
Your lyrics are sorta.... like De'troit on Draft-Day..
Played lines and strechted lyrics, I've seen it done better
Your punches are weathered...I've seen stronger feather's....
Whatever, ........kid......your just a bitch witta a bow...
You throw a good show but the substance all blows
And all the vet's know.....Game over its over like Pacman...Way outta ya league .......
You never belonged......even talkin to me....
Yet you did and you do.....your thru......Im done wit this clone
Fly'Es got more issue's than Apple's I-Phone


your flow is definatly something you need to work on Diepod.maybe cut down on the mutli's.some good punches in the verse,if you'd have worded your facebook punch right that would have been a dope punch.highlighted your best one!

v/Diepod

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Old 04-25-09, 11:49 PM   #18
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Fackin text c's......when are you gonna get it. You the ones with no concept of flow! if it doesnt look like mother goose it doesnt flow in text. Go look at any rappers lyrics and you'll say they dont flow too.

However i appreciate the vote and am on my way to check yours.
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Old 04-26-09, 09:22 PM   #19
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neither verses were ill.. i sort of get the feeling diepod was just playing around with it though that wasnt sick material... but fly e sorry man you GOT to up your game your getting slaughtered here man... sorry...

second battle today i had to vote against you... its nothing personal... keep working at it man, youll get better.
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Old 04-27-09, 12:36 AM   #20
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Voted For: DiePod

neither verses were ill.. i sort of get the feeling diepod was just playing around with it though that wasnt sick material... but fly e sorry man you GOT to up your game your getting slaughtered here man... sorry...

second battle today i had to vote against you... its nothing personal... keep working at it man, youll get better.

This battle came quick a 2 min drop here and against jtr wich is why idc how the votes went. Peep my battle wit N8 i acually sat and thought of half way decent not great but better shit and no one votes on them battles. But thanks for the feed i do appreciate it.



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Fackin text c's......when are you gonna get it. You the ones with no concept of flow! if it doesnt look like mother goose it doesnt flow in text. Go look at any rappers lyrics and you'll say they dont flow too.

However i appreciate the vote and am on my way to check yours.



Stop complainin you got the vote lol. k/o you win.
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Old 04-27-09, 10:14 AM   #21
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Your done. Like cali, im voting for myself........
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