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Old 08-20-06, 09:13 PM   #15
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble

^wtf.. that was brutal.

^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed

-alright i guess..

fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!

ok not bad?

Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids

lol, not bad but the settup was really weak. try to hit with every line whenever possible

v. slick for a better overall battle








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