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06-05-06, 05:25 PM | #1 | |||||||
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My Valentine
IP: EA48 FBD7
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229123
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229393 first drop on here, hope you'll like it so i can grace u wit more of my stuff, lemme kno wutchu think, and if u couls grade it on a scale of 1-10, 10 bein the highest i'd appreciate it alot i know somewhere there is my valentine i know that someday i will have to find (My Valentine) but right now i dont really have the time until then will you be my valentine (My Valentine) she got a body like a coke bottle, booty sweet like candy with her six pack abs and her bag made of fendi is she brown or bronze skinned before she go tannin the type that can turn me from insane and scarin i like a latin chick with an ac-a-cent but she has to have at least half my sense no money, girl i got that all covered but you gotta have a brain just to be my lover i dont like all them ditsy chicks you gotta fit the description, i'm picky chicks im choosy, you'll lose me, if you just a floosie i need a hot girl that can heat a jacuzzi i'll keep your hands full, diamonds, stone jewels and keep the bed rockin like the flinstones do Ya Ba Da Ba Doo, ive had alotta girls boo but if i hadda choose, girl id rather have you i know somewhere there is my valentine i know that someday i will have to find (My Valentine) but right now i dont really have the time until then will you be my valentine (My Valentine) she gotta be a dyme and she gotta be fine the kind that dont whine, and she gotta be mine sit back on the weekend, relax in the evening i dont need you doin no cookin or cleanin i got people that got people to do that please meet jeeves, he'll show you where the pool's at cars not automatic, i'll show you how to use that closet so big you wont know where your shoes at jewels, blues green and yellow have you in so much ice, make the freezersjealous jesus fellas, i dont mean to be stealin all the girls in the world, but i got me a feelin one day i'ma find that one that i'm gonna settle down with and have my son but for now i just have to rhyme to a girl i never met, my valentine i know somewhere there is my valentine i know that someday i will have to find (My Valentine) but right now i dont really have the time until then will you be my valentine (My Valentine) i can take you to eternity wit a one way ticket and i perfer you neva heard of me, and all my riches so it dont occur to me that you're just doin it to get into my pockets, then flip flop ruin it i'ma tell you what i like in a chick the right type that could make you my wife in a split not too skinny but not too broad not to sissy but not too hard not too fragile but not too flimsey not too bashful but not too friendly type of girl that look as good when she wake up as she do when she finished with her make up natural beauty, with a smokin hot figure dont smoke a cigarette, nothin would turn me off quicker and i realize that right this second you're out there right now as i write this record i know somewhere there is my valentine i know that someday i will have to find (My Valentine) but right now i dont really have the time until then will you be my valentine (My Valentine) |
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06-06-06, 05:21 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 2CC8 2E00
descent..topic was kool..
hook was alright flow was nice, same with structure rhymes were good... overall diss was good/descent |
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06-07-06, 11:39 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: EA48 FBD7
thanx man......uppin for more comments and/or suggestions
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06-07-06, 07:37 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 048C 24F1
This Joint Is Straight, I'm Not A Fan Of The Love Shit But It Still Grabbed My Attention Witt Some Decent Punchlines & Actually Havin A Full Piece Witt A Hook & Everything Rather Than Just A Half Assed Verse Like 90% Of Om Posts... Its Clear You Just Sat Down And Wrote Three 16's Real Fast Though With Simple Wordplay And Soundin The Same As Every Other Love Song Out. But It Was An Aight Concept & I Could Actually Picture This Shit On The Radio. 7/10
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06-09-06, 03:15 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: EA48 FBD7
appriciate the feed fam, uppin for a lil more
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