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Old 11-01-03, 09:36 PM   #1
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Just another song I did real quick. Peep and reply.....




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Old 11-03-03, 04:18 PM   #2
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listenin.........Yo this intro beat is siiiiiiiiick as hell. Who made that?
i like yer lyrics and vocab. Delivery is not quite there to me, kinda sound like yer readin at points in the cut, but you definately on the right track. Also reminds me of an old school delivery now that i listen more, it's cool i guess, not neccessarily my style but put together wit pretty nice structure. OK drop...

Get back wit some feedback on 2 songs in the forum if you could. or at least one, but they have different styles:

"A Thievez Execution"
"Incidental Contact"

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Old 11-04-03, 07:01 PM   #3
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No doubt, thanks. My boy made that beat in about 15 minutes, you should hear some other shit he did, lol. One.
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Old 11-05-03, 03:21 AM   #4
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real tight,i liked it.what's your rap style?like what beats do ypu rap to?cause your flow is real consistent and that's hard to find,with your flow you should try rappin on heavy beats not soft ones
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Old 11-05-03, 07:25 PM   #5
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the intro beat's pretty grimey still. the beat itself is RUDE, I like it.
your lyrics are pretty tyte but your flow was off from the beggining which kinda brought it down but itz all good.
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