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Old 11-07-03, 02:23 AM   #1
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This is on some real shit, everything in this song is 100% true.


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Old 11-07-03, 02:45 AM   #2
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Yo yer lyrics was tight and you flowed on beat but i thought that your voice was too high over the beat and not mixed into it. The other thing is that this song got boring to me cause yer flow expression lacked feelin' to me. You weren't puttin yer thougths on my head instead, you were just spittin...see what i'm sayin'. A lot of potential to get a lot tighter here cause the lyrics and flow was there, you just majorly lacked expression and or emotion in this drop...keep droppin'...get back on some of my audio shit when you can...1
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Old 11-19-03, 11:54 PM   #3
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Aiight no doubt, anybody else?
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Old 11-20-03, 05:29 PM   #4
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first let me say givin more feedback would help you get feedback. its a two way street. anyways your voice isnt to bad, and your lyrics were bad.. but your voice is to low. like you werent screamin. you have to like put you voice out there when you rap. it would make ya emotion much better.
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