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Old 07-15-02, 08:47 PM   #1
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Lightbulb A Liquid Flame....

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~I have a fire that burns up in me releasin the bad thoughts I think//A flame that covers me soft as a bed sheet made of mink ~Liquid that keeps my blood pumpin through out my body//Liquid that got my heart thumpin rather loudly
~A flame that dries my tears I cry at night//A Flame that keeps me warm, always right by my side
~A Liquid that drowns my thoughts of bein alone//A Liquid that washes away anything that wrong
~I have a Liquid Flame, that's driven me crazy//cuzz I'll do anythang for my Daddy, my angel,my baby......

~Once again, I'm stuck in a fucked up situation//why these people got me trippin, damn my hearts racin...
~So pretty but I don't notice, just picturin your lips on mine//hands on thighs, close my eyes cuzz Im Hipnotized, and I realize
~This ain't the average crush//not the average relationship but a deeper on put on hush
~Scared to admitt my feelins but not no more I'm talkin//If somethin botherin you, boo let me know I'm stalkin
~Until you tell me, I want to know exactly what's on your mind//tell me what's on yours I'll gladly say what's on mine
~Picture you holdin me when I'm lonely, hearin yo vioce when I'm asleep//seein you squeezin on my body, as you lay on top of me
~What's happenin? why am I breathin deep writen this poem?//been through so much ish but emotions, still scared to show em
~I'll do anything for you, give my life away for you//I will kill for you, if it came down to it boo...
~Dont think this gettin out of control but I want you so badly//and no it is not cute, actually it's terrible sadly
~You shouldn't NEED what you cant have and I cant have you yet I need//You shouldn't go for anythin less and I am less then what you need
~But I think about you 24/7, when you mad, Im mad and sad//but what can I do to stop this torture, I shouldnt be wantin you this bad....

~I have a Flame that makes all eniemies back away because of the heat//A Flame that comes from deep within me
~A Liquid that makes me float whenever I'm about to drown//Liquid that stirs up hurrican's but down not make a sound..
~I have a Liquid Flame that gives me dreams of my life//I have a Liquid Flame that is always by my side....
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Old 07-15-02, 11:07 PM   #2
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dat was tight. i almost didnt wanna read it cuz it was long but i gots ta show my luv fa everyone. i really liked dat.....a lot of emotion...it was good. i was gonna put sum fav. quotes but im too lazy cuz there was too many. but dats it fa me...much luv. respect. one
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Old 07-16-02, 12:18 AM   #3
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Wow...

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You must really like Liquid Flame alot. Cuz dat piece was mad long. See I knew you was a freak. LMAO. Well somewhat freaky in a cute and obsessed type of way. But it was an aight piece not one of ur best. Holla.
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Old 07-16-02, 02:12 AM   #4
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whoa shit ya made liquid flame name actually make sense. i gotta give props for that. stay up.

joey
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Old 07-16-02, 04:00 AM   #5
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No no no, see, Liquid Flame aint yours, he's my lover. He wasn't in YOUR bed last night, he was in MY bed last night. He didn't get YOU to bleed in the ass, he got ME to bleed in the ass.

Um, seriously though, I thought you was gonna stop writing. I'm glad you didn't. I knew you couldn't. (Unless of course you wrote this before you stopped. In which case I dunno.)

As for wanting what you can't have. I say forget about. Take me for example, I want to have sex with a chick like almost all the time. But I can't have that so I settle for internet pornography and my right hand. It does the job. (So instead of having Liquid Flame, or ANY guy for that matter, just pour some beer on your belly and rape yourself with a broom handle. It's actually the same thing as being with a guy.)

Take it easy.

(Actually, I'm so desperate to get laid, I think I'll go ask a friend of mine out. With him being twice as much of a nerd as I am, he'll be desperate enough to say yes. Only wish he'd brush his teeth though. Ew.)
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Old 07-17-02, 03:06 AM   #6
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Damn , I Wish I Knew Who This Liquid Flame Character Was , He Seems To Be A Lucky Guy To Have Someone Like You Wanting Him . . . Lol , I Loved The Poem Girl , Yours Will Be Up Before The End The Week , (No I Didn't Forget About You) , The Truth Is I've Been Thinking About You A Lot Too , I'll Try To Call You Tomorrow , In The Meantime Im'a Save This Piece In My Computer . . . Thanks Ma . . .

. . . Oh Yeah And Necro , I Know You're A Necropheliac And Everything , But Just Because I'm Dead Inside Doesn't Mean That I'm Gay . . . Lol . . . . .






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Old 07-18-02, 08:24 AM   #7
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nice piece for sure...sure liquid flame will love it....very freaky...but very good....respec....
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Old 07-19-02, 10:28 AM   #8
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wow ...
was off tha hook gurl,
props ...
i liked it all so no need fo` quotes ...

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