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Old 10-06-07, 05:40 PM   #1
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"GET YO HEAD BUSTED" FT. DA GUNNA SOME NEW SHIT FOR YOUR EAR DRUMS!!!

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THIS IS ONE OF THE 6 SONGS IMMA PERFORM THIS AT MY SHOW....
SLY BOOGIE IS GON BE IN PERFORMIN AT THE EVENT TOO IM HELLA ESTATIC....ANYWAYS CHECK THIS OUT =1=
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Old 10-06-07, 05:45 PM   #2
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go check out my emo rap thread.....holla.....ima do somethin no one does anymore leave feed:


i like the screw style on this beat...its a lil empty....i feel like a lil more could benifit it alot but its good


your verse is simple...which makes in genius....you didnt overwork the beat....it helped what you were saying hit harder....tho it dont sound like your usual mixing...its a lil more hallow then you usually bring it....prolly my speakers for real tho....the second guy had good character on the mic....it seemed like he got lost a lil bit...like his direction but its good for what it is.....

somethin id bump but would get old quick.....the beat is too repatitive.....good shit for a preformance tho....like 2nd or 3rd song in a 6 song set.....holla at my shit....yep yep
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Old 10-06-07, 09:14 PM   #4
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This is compleatly wack..............


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Old 10-06-07, 09:20 PM   #5
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Hmm....sounds ok i guess, but just a lil too generic. Beats really nothing speical or anything, i prob. wouldn't bump it or anything....overal the song is ok, but i dont know.....its kidna of like, you have a level of songs that you would enjoy for some time, i can't see myself enjoying this song more than just one listen....

its true feed back....

g'luck tho...

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Old 10-07-07, 01:12 AM   #6
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This is compleatly wack..............


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HATER TO THE FULLEST LOL ........GET YO HEAD BUSTED!!!......
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