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DeLeon 1 16.67%
macKa 5 83.33%
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Old 05-14-04, 08:42 AM   #1
macKa
Flyweight
 
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From: Sydney, AUS.
MACKA vs. DELEON

IP: F40A FCD2

u said u spittin first, so drop, ill hit it up within 20 minutes.

10 lines max
first to 5 votes.
 
Old 05-14-04, 08:55 AM   #2
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
From: Sa-Town
IP: 8FFB BB92

Damn i told you to set this up like 38 mins ago-i got to go i'll drop my shit around 5-5:30
 
Old 05-14-04, 09:00 AM   #3
macKa
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From: Sydney, AUS.
IP: F40A FCD2

shit, time zone'll fuck me up. sorry bout bein late settin it bro. ill spit as soon as i can. if ur gonna be a while, then ill b a while afta that, coz i got to go to bed soon. It's late over here.
 
Old 05-14-04, 06:54 PM   #4
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
IP: 899F 26A3

My Razor-is-Pressed, I made it Graze-through-your-Neck
I'll Drown you Greater-in-Depths of a Lake-when-it's-Drenched
While Erasin-my-Sketch, escaping Agents-and-Feds
I'll have you Payin-your-Pledge with the Weight-of-a-Sledge
You got a Date-with-the-Ledge, I'll throw you Straight-off-the-Edge
I'll smash your Face-with-my-Benz untill your Angel-Ascends
Then Staple-the-Ends like it's the Latest-of-Trends
My Range-and-my-Lex are full of Paste-to-Inject
Tripping till you're thinking you're in Space-like-a-Trek
I'll take the Blade-that-I-Clench and Lay-you-to-Rest
I'll break your Legs-with-a-Wrench and have you Hanged-from-a-Fence
 
Old 05-14-04, 06:59 PM   #5
*Tay.G*SinCity*
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Man, Mackka is gonna fuckkin MURDER dat shit... Good shit doe homie... Jus sayin...
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Old 05-14-04, 07:13 PM   #6
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
IP: 6247 B101

(*(*(*ILLUMINATI*)*)*) Novus Ordo Seclorum ? can i get a dickrida^^^^^^^^
 
Old 05-14-04, 09:45 PM   #7
macKa
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From: Sydney, AUS.
IP: F40A FCD2

damn, no fuckin punches. ah well, ill hav to take it easy on ur ass then.

My name’s like heroin, you shouldn’t take-it-in-vain(vein)//
Snap your vertebrae, then when you come back, break-it-again//
Make-you-feel-pain, shakin-your-“frame” like earthquakes-to-a-window//
Lyrically rape your wife while my verse-makes-her-a-widow//
Disturb your ethics, slice your bitch crew and serve the cervix-to-Leon//
Claiming LD but not on the sig shows how many dicks-you-be-on//*
Having kinky anal sex is the only time you “cum-with-hot-shit”//
Say you gunning-with-clicks, but it’s clear you’re rubbing-on-dicks//
You got no punches like a right-handed Jim Abbott while I smash-your-chest//
You’ll regret trying to spit against me so you try and “catch-your-breath”//

Look at the Lyrical Destruction Sig
 
Old 05-14-04, 10:00 PM   #8
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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From: 845
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While both of you have a nice flow it was pretty easy to see a clear victor here.

Deleon- Your verse flowed mad nicely but you only had one verse I could even call a punchline and it wasn't super strong... You didn't use any personal insults/name play or anything I expect in a battle so Ima give you a 6 outta 10.

Macka- Decent flow, I will assume you didn't come as hard as you could- Your punchlines actually existed, you mentioned his sig which adds a little bit of personalization to the rhyme....I think all in all it was a good verse so Ima give you 7 outta 10.... Macka Wins.
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Old 05-14-04, 10:01 PM   #9
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Old 05-14-04, 10:04 PM   #10
macKa
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IP: F40A FCD2

cant really vote on that shit man, me and 40 tight. if u got ne other battles tho, ill b happy to.
 
Old 05-14-04, 10:57 PM   #11
macKa
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IP: F40A FCD2

c'mon, lets get some votes
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Old 05-15-04, 12:21 AM   #12
Diagnose
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Quote:
Originally Posted by SevenThird
While both of you have a nice flow it was pretty easy to see a clear victor here.

Deleon- Your verse flowed mad nicely but you only had one verse I could even call a punchline and it wasn't super strong... You didn't use any personal insults/name play or anything I expect in a battle so Ima give you a 6 outta 10.

Macka- Decent flow, I will assume you didn't come as hard as you could- Your punchlines actually existed, you mentioned his sig which adds a little bit of personalization to the rhyme....I think all in all it was a good verse so Ima give you 7 outta 10.... Macka Wins.

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Old 05-15-04, 12:43 AM   #13
DA BOY GENIUS
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Deleon: Opening was plain. There weren't them hard hittin punches I expect to see in the battle. The thing I liked about your flow was the vocab and flow. It flowed pretty well and I liked it overall but you have to come harder at your opponenet using more punches to get at him or her. Good Flow though.

Macka: Good opening punchline. Flow and Vocab was decent. The reason I am voting for you because you actually got at him and showed him some punchlines. I like the line about how he claims one thing but his sig says something else. You had some pretty hot punches in there for taking it easy on him.

Vote: Macka

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Old 05-15-04, 12:50 AM   #14
PoLiFicK
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From: bedrock
IP: 48BE E3B7

lopsided battle ^^^^ i smell d/r s dat U?????/

winner deleon all da way better flow and punches connected nice drop deleon

bestline-I'll have you Payin-your-Pledge with the Weight-of-a-Sledge
You got a Date-with-the-Ledge, I'll throw you Straight-off-the-Edge

nice drop

worsteline -none

ur elavating day after day nice

overall verse gets a 8.7/10

maca ok spit but dosent match 2 deleon

bestlien-Disturb your ethics, slice your bitch crew and serve the cervix-to-Leon//
Claiming LD but not on the sig shows how many dicks-you-be-on//*

okk

worsteline-Having kinky anal sex is the only time you “cum-with-hot-shit”//
Say you gunning-with-clicks, but it’s clear you’re rubbing-on-dicks//

sex linez lame dats how u lost

overall verse gets a 7/10 neva use sex linez

winner-deleon
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Old 05-15-04, 01:33 AM   #15
.\\assacre
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Deleon: the opening was aight and the flow was hard to stay up with at first, untill you got into it, but that takes off points right there, and alot of it didn't make sense, and the punches weren't that hard hitting

Macka: ya opening was good shit, and it hooked me, and the flow kept it aight, good multis and wordplay, structure was good as well. and just kept flowing the hole way though.

nice.


but ummmaaa havta


Vote: Macka


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p.s can ya'll vote on any battles with .\\assacre in it, like .\\assacre vs black sinzz and such. just look you'll see it.

thanks and much appreciated... good battle
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