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kingz and enygma have already checked in just post your verses the winner of this will face restricted next week so he can have a shot to win his title back

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

checkin in
i hope i dont get merked too bad lol

LOL......I was about to say the same thing.......checkin in and will spit tomorrow.....gotta go to work right now..

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Tryin a new style....

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes
Rubbin in his ointment to claim topical with crappy scriptures
Such a disappointment.....even your rapper ain't happy wit ya
Kingz is gettin his cap peeled.....now we can see all ya doubts
It's clear that you lack skill....cause people see ya and bounce
Kingz is garbage..........I'll pull his card, got somethin to say
And since I'm heartless........he's easy to trump wit my spade
Yeah I'm champ by default....but no ones changin the options
I'll clock this man til he falls....just to abstain him from watchin
He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star
Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate
I'll rape ya like eight pokes.....rhymes gotcha without ya draws
And I hate to use a gay joke....but he likes watchin bouncin balls
I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets


Since Kingz took so long to drop his verse, one of my punches doesn't make much sense....When I said even his rapper ain't happy with him, it was because his Rapperz character's happy meter was at 0%.....it was that way until today when he deleted it....

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You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist
in ya sig its says 'yes we are that dumb'...at least your honest
kid claims to be 'sick'...well...yeh you make me 'vomit'
Champ, im gonna take ya 'title'... naa i think i'd rather not *cough*
you should retire now dog...cos ya career is tapering off
the only way you can drop 'hot shit'...is if u imitate ya avatar pic
ya punchlines have ran out...kinda like ya toilet paper.. very quick
yo i'm a living legend...thats right, im not a myth
'im comin' for you...like yo Philly homeboy Will Smith
catch my drift?...naa dog you can't comprehend
like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend'
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here
i think you better act like 'Obie Trice'..and say 'Cheers'
fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda
yep thats right...you are an indangered species
as a king i aint got 'lancers' but i drive two mitsubishi's
your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
i aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes

^^ funny...not sure it quite makes sense tho...lol


Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate

^^ not feelin this...ur piece got wordplay out the anus...jus the punches aren't landing hard

I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets

^^ good flow...but this needs to be directed at him more...you're rapping more about yourself

You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist

^^...nice opener and true...almost a personal


like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend'
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here

^^ very hard...directed right at him...coo

your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
i aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'


^^ haha..nice closer


with Better...much better..punches, KING takes this battle

Flow: King
RHyming:Tie
Punches:King

vote: Kingz

^^^

I appreciate your vote but what happened to the rest of my verse that was obviously hittin hard? Do you just not get some of the punches? Cause if you don't get the punches, then you probably shouldn't vote....

Anyway....
Kingz - 1
Enygma - 0

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Bleh... Enygma had this one easily. There were few lines I wasn't feeling at all, one of which was the rapperz one. You ought to know that those were played before the first one was even used. The kingz/stalemate one wasn't great either. I liked the heartless/spade wordplay, not that great a punch though. However, your personals were tight, I like the "see you and bounce", I like "philly destroying vets", I like you using that one link, I like the bible line.

kingz.. you came weak. your first four lines... if you had come at me with that shit i would have won easily. you didn't do much with the *cough* except rhyming it... didn't use it at all... you're only two good punches were your closer and the punch using his avvy, the rest was pretty much garbage.

v/ enygma

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

OK......

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 1

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EH . . . Average Battle Not That Great From Both Sides, I Would Quote Some Lines But None Really Intrigued Me . .

enygma had nice use with multis but it got repititous. .

I`m going to go with . .

v/enygma - Reason - none of his lines made me say .. wow that was incredibly homo . .or what the fuck ..

fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda

^ The Hell Is That Man ?

`your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake`

^ You HAVE To Be Fuckin` Kidding Me ..


Enygma - You have potential, just organize your verse a little more, shorten up the bars and use more of a set - punch structure .. rather than . . st - filler - punch - filler - punch type shit.

Kingz could paint murals...still couldn't picture him runnin the show
And he made his name plural...just so he could double his votes
^^^^AVERAGE.....6.0
Rubbin in his ointment to claim topical with crappy scriptures
Such a disappointment.....even your rapper ain't happy wit ya
^^^^O.K...PERSONAL......6.0
Kingz is gettin his cap peeled.....now we can see all ya doubts
It's clear that you lack skill....cause people see ya and bounce
^^PERSONAL WASN'T FEELING THAT 1.......6.0
Kingz is garbage..........I'll pull his card, got somethin to say
And since I'm heartless........he's easy to trump wit my spade
^^^GOOD WORD PLAY...BAD STRUCTURE.....6.0
Yeah I'm champ by default....but no ones changin the options
I'll clock this man til he falls....just to abstain him from watchin
^^^^^^WASN'T FEELIN'.....6
He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star
^^^BASIC......6
Yo, this dude is so dumb...I left him speechless wit failed grades
Cause he ain't movin no one......must got Kingz in a stalemate
??????????????????????????????......6
I'll rape ya like eight pokes.....rhymes gotcha without ya draws
And I hate to use a gay joke....but he likes watchin bouncin balls
GOOD PERSONAL...........7
I took one look at my rival........quick to run up in both pockets
Got your own book in the bible......but still left with no prophets
^^^^^^^NICE PUNCH.............7
Get lost, I'll knock ya silly.....his heart's filled with lots of regrets
Afterall, I'm from Philly..........where we're used to demolishin vets
^^WEAK FINISHER.............7.....=63/100

You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist
^^^PERSONALS/NICE PUNCH......7
in ya sig its says 'yes we are that dumb'...at least your honest
kid claims to be 'sick'...well...yeh you make me 'vomit'
PERSONALS/ 7
Champ, im gonna take ya 'title'... naa i think i'd rather not *cough*
you should retire now dog...cos ya career is tapering off
^^^^^^O.K............6
the only way you can drop 'hot shit'...is if u imitate ya avatar pic
ya punchlines have ran out...kinda like ya toilet paper.. very quick
^^GOOD PUNCH^^.LOL FUNNY PUNCH.........8
yo i'm a living legend...thats right, im not a myth
'im comin' for you...like yo Philly homeboy Will Smith
^^?????..WEAK PUNCH...........6
catch my drift?...naa dog you can't comprehend
like scarface...summit u will understand 'say hello to my little friend'
^^^WEAK.....6
you sed thanks to ~R~?..cos thats the reason you here
i think you better act like 'Obie Trice'..and say 'Cheers'
^^^WEAK.......6
fuck you, fuck your whole crew...and ya c.s propaganda
has his name in black and white...dog thinks he is a panda
^^^WEAK/PERSONAL.........6
yep thats right...you are an indangered species
as a king i aint got 'lancers' but i drive two mitsubishi's
.......6
your a fake...quit the rap game for fuck's sake
you rap like a retarded justin timberlake
...............6
I aint unloyal but i left your crew..aint that a kick in da crotch?
cos ur 'chryme sindicate' would get foiled by the 'neighbourhood watch'
^^^...........7=71/110.........

nice drop by both of u both threw some hott punhes and combos and hott personals and a tite flow 2 go wit it

kingz-

bestline-You better leave champ (by default)…you jus cant face this
You say ‘white guys rule’…then you claim your not racist

nice start came stron on da 1st 2 linez nice nice

worsteline-none i think yo verse was good piece 2 make u go back and read it again

enygma-hott shit again 2 u u had some throw away punches and a nice flooow

bestline-He's handy on the sack..................as far as my balls are
This is the championship match....and he calls me an all star

nice

worsteline-again u had nun eitha

punches-kingz
flow-enygma
structure-both
personals-both
consitnat verse-both
open-kingz
close kingz
overall winner-kingz

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Do The Math....................
Weak Battle.........
Good Personals........weak Punches...........