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Old 09-05-04, 04:33 PM   #1
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My New Shit ''took Ya Girl''

IP: 2F54 4E81

This one of my new/old song i never posted so its new to yall
check it out its pretty hot i got the second verse and the chorus


http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1427643&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1427643&q=Lo
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Old 09-05-04, 07:39 PM   #2
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i peeped ur song-- live my life... took my grl wasn't workin....

i liked ur lyrics alot actually....

but i kinda crunched some lines.... if u work on breathing while u rap u wont have to take those breaths which lead to gaps inbetween your lines.. ya feel me?... nice though i think ur lyrics are ur strong points and nice chrorus's....

gook look though keep elevatin u got potentiontal
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Old 09-05-04, 07:41 PM   #3
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actually do u wanna audio battle?

i think we would be a good match up....

set it up and Pm me...

my record sucks in audio cuz i lost to Carson jet and seventhirds... <both are real ill... PM me i will prolly forget aboutt his thread.. aight
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