Peep a new beat i just did with my new sample kit, constructive feed please. I will RTF!!!!

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Im feelin this son....melodies//is right..you havent got the intro right..the intro needs to be different to the verse..drums and melodies all good...and hook is aiight pianos is off tho...

I mean intro 20 seconds, n then verse 40 seconds..hook 20..u dig...n go like that...n the intro has to have the least intro's..verse..kick in with a new drum or the first drum if theres none in the intro..and hook add sumin like a piano/string/guitar..and that's a basic beatizzle

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aight...thanks for the feed i'll change shit up and holla

and upppinnnnnnn

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Checking it now man...

The sad beat didnt work for me, so I checked "You Aint Ready For This".

Like the melody...a tad repetive though. Drums are nice, feeling them. Hook is pretty good too.

Damn, good stuff man. We should collab on a beat sometime.

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Aight thanks man......yeah we should ill hit you up sometime....and uppinnnnnn

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