Yo, this is my first full beat fully finished, just wanted some feed on it, cause i wanna elevate. I think my main problem is the drums so if i could get some help on that i would appreciate it, thanks y'all.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4807151

There the only one there 'Got the streets on lock'

Appreciate all feed,

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Uppin............................................. .....need feed y'all

Dude, there's no real rythem in this.....ok, when that cookoo clock thing stops it's got a simple loop. Dude, the hook is horrible.....lol. The melody is OK, but you can't just let it loop through the whole song cause it gets annoying. You should use what you have for your verse spots as your hook and kill some of the melody for the actual verse spots.....I hope you know what I'm talking about, cause I think I might have lost myself there a bit....lol

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Aight thanks for the feed

uppinnn for feed will RTF

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