First guy, verse started off dope as hell, I liked it, your vocals are too soft, they need more clarity cuz they sound blended to the beat, but good stuff.

Hook is gay....

Second guy, vocals are clear but too much hiss, flow is decent, stayed consistent. Nice stuff

first dude sucks my balls. im sorry if you thought that was extreme but for real if you guys think he's good you got somethin wrong with your dome peices. flow is so unentertaining. you could get good but elevation is needed. i rapped over this beat too, i love the beat but you aint rock it rite. the chorus is aight tho. sounds not on point toward the end but its straight. seven third you changed up your flow. its not as fast paced as usual. but yea you got a nice voice and you still rockin it rite. but the other dude is not good in my oppinion. sorry i know now im gonna get alot of hate on this board but hey, its all part of honesty. no hate here but it seems like you just aint doin you on the mic. but its all part of finding your own tru essence of hip hop. good luck on your magical journey.pz bitches

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