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Old 01-24-06, 07:49 PM   #1
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Old 01-24-06, 08:08 PM   #2
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nice beat..

1st dude...flow is hot..lyrics is ok but the delevery realy makes up for it..quality is good here.

like the hook n shit....

2nd dude....eclips line n nice...aww man..u n i line killed it...sore through line killed it..NICE lyricisum man....

3rd....flow is off a bit...or maby jus werd..lyrics is nice...delevery is ok...

nice track man
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Old 01-24-06, 08:55 PM   #3
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damn I always forget to list the niggas in the track...
My b... Synz, A6, HD is the order we spit in...
HD & Synz on the hook

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Old 01-24-06, 09:40 PM   #4
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aight feelin dis beat...da hooks good i fucks wit it...1st dude lyricz is coo..flows good as well as delivery...2nd cat lyricz is good had sum tuff lines in there flows pretty good deliverys good...3rd nigga 1st thing i noticed was he jumped off wrong on his verse...lyricz is ok...flows ok...deliverys str8...dis isnt str8 tho i fucks wit dis 4 da most part nahmean...keep it up
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Old 01-25-06, 11:10 AM   #5
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beat is tight hittin hard....Yeah i like that hook...synz- tight multies, his styles on point....
A6-i think he was a bit weaker than synz but still tight i wasnt really feelin him lyrically though...HD-needs to speak louder his style is different but i can't say i'm feelin it. Overall this track was aight it's not a piece of shit but it's not the pope either...
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Old 01-27-06, 09:42 AM   #6
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^ aight will peep no doubt...
*nods* yeah my style's different...
Never wanted ta sound like anyone else...
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Old 02-01-06, 11:18 AM   #7
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i peeped a few tracks... you dudes is aiihgt.... you should holla at my man tito bronsky up in oyd.... we should get this crew collab poppin... werd
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Old 02-01-06, 02:28 PM   #8
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tight beat

1st - nice flow, ok lyrics, good delivery......


hook is tight

2nd - ....tight verse all around good...keep it up

3rd - nice lyrics...decent flow, nice delivery


good shit


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Old 02-03-06, 04:33 PM   #9
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^^^

Thankx for the feed... I'mma peep 1 of your drops soon as I can... gotta go pay the rent right now... I'll probably peep it tomarrow


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No doubt just give us a shout... and we can get shit crackin'
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Old 02-03-06, 05:11 PM   #10
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lovin the beat...

hooks nice... catchy...

first verse... synz? nice shit mann... flows on point... nice verse....

second verse A6? ... ill wordplay... not feelin the pauses tho.. everythin else is ill..

HD ... yehh u needah raise ur vocals a lil more... i mean i could hear u... but u could project urself a lil more u feel me?

ill tracc tho... stay up famms
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Old 02-04-06, 11:34 PM   #11
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Word.....I gotta agree with everyone else. This shit is actually pretty good. Keep this siht up man, we need some more dope heads on here

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Old 02-11-06, 01:10 PM   #12
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Peep it.. 1st dude is nice... Cool lyrics, nice delivery. good shit

Chorus is nice

2nd Dude is cool too, nice delivery good lyrics

3rd dude - nice mic presence good lyrics the usual
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