intro is cool should add people talkin like reporters and shit...quality is good...your flow is on...i like that beat fits well...you speak clear so i can understand you thas something i personally find hard so kudos...that "me me me" thing sounded wack maybe its some joke im not in on?? i dunno know i feel left out lol...anyway hook is good i like how u overdubbed it to make it stand out...overall good job with this and thanks for peepin me

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