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Old 01-24-06, 08:09 PM   #1
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Old 01-24-06, 08:44 PM   #2
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im sorta in a "don't fuck with me" mood

so...I'll leave abbreviated feed


CHO...learn better breath control brotha...u sound like u have ADD

I don't like ur dubbing...out of sync


also...the clips are gimmicky...keep em at the beginning or the end...they took away from ur verse


Tito...flow was stock...str8 all the way through, nothin major one way or the other


Cho...flow was cool...not great...not bad...= pretty decent


lyrically...heard a few good lines here and there


str8 drop fellas...it lacks direction though



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Old 01-24-06, 09:04 PM   #3
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u dropped 2 of the same links
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Old 01-24-06, 09:17 PM   #4
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sry mom....

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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 01-24-06, 09:32 PM   #5
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aight dis beats coo...1st dude...lyricz is aight..flows ok could be tighter...deliverys aiight nahmean doesnt really sound natural tho...2nd cat lyricz is aiiight dont like dem clips in da verse shit is stupid 2 me honestly...flows str8...deliverys ok...overall dis track was decent could use sum work hea & there
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Old 01-25-06, 10:31 PM   #6
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dope... preciate the lunchin
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Old 01-25-06, 10:38 PM   #7
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beat is pretty cool...1st mc- ur style is cool nothin i wannna comment on 2 much maybe more emotion 2nd mc- wasnt feelin at all...sorry dude i just wasnt feelin ur delivery...and add some more emotion ur talkin tough man u gotta sound it... lyrics was cool though...LOL like the outro...didnt like the sample before it...keep at it ya'll
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Old 01-26-06, 07:18 PM   #8
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Old 01-26-06, 07:34 PM   #9
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beat is pretty cool...1st mc- ur style is cool nothin i wannna comment on 2 much maybe more emotion 2nd mc- wasnt feelin at all...sorry dude i just wasnt feelin ur delivery...and add some more emotion ur talkin tough man u gotta sound it... lyrics was cool though...LOL like the outro...didnt like the sample before it...keep at it ya'll
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i'll leave feed rite here....

umm you suck ..... k ?
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Old 01-29-06, 04:30 PM   #10
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Old 01-29-06, 07:05 PM   #11
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cho ure flow sucks ass
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Old 01-30-06, 06:31 PM   #12
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thanx for the feed dumb ass^^^


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Old 01-31-06, 07:02 PM   #13
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Old 02-03-06, 02:34 PM   #14
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Old 02-04-06, 01:13 PM   #15
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can we get a lil feed damn it???!!!!!!!!^*%*($##$(^#(^($^#(^(*^(*())(*&)%%&^^@@@@$UOIUUP^^%((%*^(*&^*&

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