The songs is just an acapella on a verse i wrote here's the link and enjoy

the song: http://www.soundclick.com/fotrill

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631670

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631701

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

this shit was dope, quite a few quotable lines, and the closin bar was nasty- track is spoken wordish, kinda reminds me of the acca on the bis 2000 b.c album-

"my 5 fingers said to my dick... ima beat that ass"-
"should say peace out, but yall blow like a sneeze, clasp ya dome, squeeze ya teeth out- ya show ya peice out, leave my knees 6 feet in ya feces leak out like a pcp drout"

haha i like the way you write, keep droppin

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pretty dope, I like your flow, the only thing thats a downfall on this was that you can't keep your flow going. You always pause then do that blah blah blah and then pause, try and keep a steady flow man. but it's pretty dope, you have a pretty funny style to the way you write lol. the beans line was funny lol.

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why u doin acapella? lol

its pretty good but i cant reall rate ya flow r shit..lyrics r coo, nice emotion n delivery.

nice drop..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103
holla back^^^^^


Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That"

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accapellas allways easier to flow, lol.

this is good, a few nice lines that stood out making it more affective.

Feed used 1/25/06 "Poetik Karma"

yoru voice is odd
id liek to hear you rhyme to a ebat
alot of quotables
id like ot hear you on a track with tito
flwo there wasnt a beat to follow so it was prety cool

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Pretty nice lines in there...

Can't wait to hear an actual track.

Good shit.

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220491

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yeah those r my fav'S to lol

then peep my other tracks on soundclick

Here's the story...i got a big ass box in my room full of rhymes and i was goin through it tryin to find some shit to record and i found this verse which i liked but forgot about and i rapped it...so i was like "this would make a tight acapella" got to the studio and tried to put it to a beat but i wasnt feelin it so i told my man to just press record and i spit it.

THANX FOR THE FEED EVERYBODY

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

listning......................
voice is ight................................
flow is good seems to be anyway..........................
deleivery is good................
lyrics r sikkness.........funny to ....................

yeah i def i wanna hear this track......................

if this was a free your dope.....................if not it was dope anyway

Feed used 1/26/06 "fresh like me"

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LOL no it's not but thanx for the feed

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

return tha fav on my fresh like me track please and thank you

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aight thats cool

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

nice multis broken up through out... lacked emotion in parts... fucked with the vocabulary in this... kept the ass ending a bit too long to have no real multis in that section... Lyrically sound for the most part... would like to hear it behind a beat to see how it really flows...

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thanx for the feed


how so?

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill