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OYD MAFIA

Uppppppppppppppppp

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OYD MAFIA

Me and Ike already owned this shit yo.

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nice choice for beat...wish u wouldnt of kept the hook...not really feelin ur style and lyrics need a bit elevation but u flow pretty well for me...keep at it
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467

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i love that beat... one of my favorite instrumentals... but u shoulda flipped it different n used a diff hook... be more original... u kno? content in here was arite... flow was there... overall decent tracc...

stay up...

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dis beats pretty tuff...yea i dont like da original hook dat u used on hea...lyricz is ok..flows str8...not really feelin ya delivery dawg...overall dis was decent...

Feed used 1/26/06 "twin eagles"

pretty nice ish unf...i unno i like ya flow and delivery on this lyrics is str8...hit me up i'll collab this if its still open.

pretty coo

plws coo, deliverys coo, emotions coo, i dont liek ure voice tho, but not everyone will so what u gunna do right..

its pretty nice drop. just work on ure speech

Feed used 1/27/06 "Finding The Answer"

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Yeah ex get on it

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Yuck.
Im not feeling the way u chose to attack this beat.
It's not kosher. Tooooooo slow and no empahisis.
i dont understand why u used lil wayne chorus.
Thats a no no.
im just not feeling this at all.

Elevate

Feed used 1/27/06 "How We Shoot Rmx"

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man out of all tha cats that got on this beat.......you came da weakest......ya lyrics aint that bad but damn man ya gotta work on ya voice cuz that shit is annoyin, this is juss me i been listenin to ya songs each time i hear hear good lyrics but ya delivery and voice isn't quite there.......maybe it'll get better when ya get a lil older, cuz ur voice rite now is still high so....aiite man keep droppen......

pz

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This Beat Is Hot buy mad on my nerves fam, man ya ya voice do need werk, and that flow is offf.... u got semi ootential but u need alot of work dawgy..work on that shit..and ill peep more of your shit

Feed used 1/28/06 "Get Ya Hood Involved"