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Varentao 0 0%
Understatement 5 100.00%
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Old 10-08-03, 04:17 PM   #16
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Originally posted by Content
sorry to freepost on this but hazy will probaly
judge whats easier to read...which is my opponents..
my words come from my fuckin heart and arent just
fancied in a way to make it sound good..its all for a
reason and makes perfect sense.....good judges
would be the following for the remainder of this..

Gege..hazy didnt even spell you name right....

Camarac
Shiznit
Deacon


How can you misspell 'GeGe'? you mean 'remrqabl?' shes too lazy to type the whole thing out..always has been.
BUT...
Dang Content, you have had a lot of gripes with judges in this tourny Hazy took a lot of time to vote, and she explained herself well..Im sorry if you dont like it Content..I already got rid of Johnny for you...Besides...Hazy is only 1 vote out of three..CAMARAC, SHIZNIT, or DEACON myself can still vote on this, whomever gets the opportunity to first. Best out of 3.
 
Old 10-08-03, 05:01 PM   #17
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This was pretty dope actually, a nice topic, two good takes on it, Varentao got really indepth with his, nice imagery and such were decent, liked the take on the topic, good writers voice but it was pretty much the same with Maven's, great written piece, emotional side to his was its standout, depth was there, imagery and such were top notch, i liked his from start to finish, held my attention well, i felt if Varentao had made his longer, he could of snuck this win, but as it stands, i felt Maven grasped / potraid the topic better as a whole.

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sorry V!
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Old 10-08-03, 05:08 PM   #18
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Well thats 2-0, Understatement's favor.
Looks like I don'tneed to vote on this one..I was going to vote for Understatment, too....Hard decision to make, V, your verse was amazing, if the whole thing would have been as powerful as the last stanza, you might have taken it. Still beautifully written tho...And that was thing about Under's...His whole thing WAS as powerful as his last line...Really reached out and grabbed me, made me think.
Nice competition, nonetheless...Both of you are very talented..
V, sorry, i know this was a rough topic for you to write about...when coming up with it, i tried to think of something Id never seen either of you write about....
Great effort tho...
Understatement will move on to the final round..
 
Old 10-08-03, 05:17 PM   #19
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^edited the polls for you Gege.


...sooo you can start the final round and get this thing on the road.


Congrats Pat..oh and yeah...happy bday suckah!
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Old 10-08-03, 07:51 PM   #20
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I agree. Under most definetly deserved to win this. Whilst i wrote within myself more than without. He wrote both within and without. One hell of a piece.

EDIT:

Oh yeah, and i felt Hazy's judging was fair enough. You can't pick and choose judges you know. Different judges have different takes. You got to go with the flow of it...
 
Old 10-09-03, 07:47 PM   #21
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( I am including myself in the final judging.. Since I was one of the judges for this tourny before I took my break.. ) If you guys want me to set the finals up let me know, for now I'll just let DaGyrl take care of it I guess.
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Old 10-09-03, 11:31 PM   #22
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^you guess?
You want to just leave and dump everything on me and then come back and pick up when you feel like it?..

OK go ahead and run the rest, End.

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Old 10-10-03, 06:02 AM   #23
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Gege should be able to finish up what she
had picked up because she has done
exceptionally well when most people would
have just said the shit was over...

jus mi paycheck

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Old 10-10-03, 08:00 AM   #24
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^True true. Gege is in the right.

Should be a very good final. Maybe for the final you will extend the judges to 5? Just a suggestion..
 
Old 10-10-03, 09:34 AM   #25
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^that would be a good idea

and since Gege picked it up, I think she should finish it off. It's her tourney now.
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