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09-12-04, 06:22 AM
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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Practice
IP: 07E0 A9F2
You've never head or an mc as articulate as me
fuck wid me you'll be cut opened severed hung 10 feet im the killer bee that an't afraid to sting just cringe self harm myself just to get this little bitch binned I'm the rap lord i'll stab you with a sword rip open till ya on da floor wid blood poured Fuck poet just shut it, you can't take da preasure you'll get stemped on just like a little creature you wanna attack me with words I flip ya da birds I an't got time for bitches poet ur whole family r nerds Aparently gangstar bitch thinks im everybodys hate your so stupid your talentless wid no metephors to create I attach words on top of them the lower your selfesteem snatch your whole soul clean wake up like it was a dream You are to damn arrorgant to judge all I gotta say is lay off im sick of you lot take a hike all you are is one deseased cough Bitches you all live in ditches caressing der mums ass wid kisses praying 4 better days god looks down n just laughs at ya wishes Okay im trying to improve with my rhyming here no beef only to da people I hate!. I want some help on the bolded ones I have marked. If you think I could be dope once I get more of a better syle let me know. peace |
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09-12-04, 06:30 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
....That was wack..
Im sorry, Just my opinion. |
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09-12-04, 06:36 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: B587 18C9
all i can say is keep working on ya skillz....ummm no umm beef....*cough cough*
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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09-12-04, 06:37 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
Man.. ya cant rap, ya wack.. by everyone ya blazed n' spent whattya gon do? ask me for tips? ... or just change ya name again.. wheres my name?you just heated cos ya wack...look at this bitch, scared sonned the kid so many times he afraid of puttin me in there ah well.. least u stopped pmin cats.. realised talk of assonance is old.. but ya still wack.. peeps wouldnt notice ya post if ya wrote half of it in bold!
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Last edited by One-Man-Band : 09-12-04 at 06:49 AM. |
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09-12-04, 06:39 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
^1 bar of that killed his entire verse.
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09-12-04, 06:46 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
Lol.. Learn how to rhyme^
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09-12-04, 06:51 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
was that fuck you intended for me as well? or u too scared..
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09-12-04, 06:58 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
man u aint got any pics of me.... just go google search some shit i dont give a damn.. if you saw a REAL pic of me ur 10yr old ass would step off..
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09-12-04, 06:59 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
^Thise pics were wack..
If you really wanna make him cry.. Battle him and put an L on his rec.. Unless your pussy................. |
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09-12-04, 07:25 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
No seriously.. If you want respect, you should battle one man band..
Cuz at the moment, no1 has any respect for you. |
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09-13-04, 01:34 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: E6EB 1B86
^ive told you a thousand fuckin times... no one can "elevate you" people give you tips to get better.. i gave you tips.. you dont listen.. youre ignorant and big-headed, and i myself think you're wack because of it... man its ok to ask for help, but at least know what you are asking for and talking about. Nobody knows about assonance or perfect rhyming, we just flow.. So forget all that shit.. just rap.. practice will make you dope..
if you really feel raw about this shit, ill be waiting.. come battle me whenever you want... but for now, i think youre wack.
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