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07-12-04, 06:10 PM | #1 | |||||
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When In Rome
IP: B09D C100
The last day of school, I'm with my mama at the gas station Says for the hundreth time how proud she is of my graduation We hit the road, on the way back to my home at the Brook Makin' sure my gear is straight, cause it's all about the look Rememberin' my old crew and all that trouble that we had Also feelin' kinda nervous, it's been a while, they may be mad I went to school to learn, but the schoolin's back at home Well u know u gotta do what those niggas do, when in Rome Been back one day from college, and fuck, I'm full of doubt But what the fuck, I shout upstairs, "Hey Ma! I'm goin out!" Goddamn, shit's changed around here, street covered in dirt Turn the corner, I heard somethin', then, I got blood on my shirt "What the fuck? E-yo Stee, is that you son? when u get back? My fault about your shirt, son, but I had to give this bitch a smack." I stood there shocked, then said "That you, Petey? you changed!" Threatenin' the poor girl on the floor with a smile, kinda deranged Turns to me and said "So, I thought you was off gettin' smart?" "What da fuck, Petey, u ain't no gangsta." Tryin' to play the part But in truth it's sad, lookin' at my friend who changed so much We used to talk about how we gonna be millionares and such Now this niggas drugged out, smackin' up girls for God knows why She tryin' to get away, he grabs her hair, and she begins to cry I went to school to learn, but the schoolin's back at home Well u know u gotta do what those niggas do, when in Rome Been around the hood for a week, seen most of my old crew Hit the store yesterday, Jimmy Jazz, got me somethin' new I try and stay around the crib, shit's more dangerous now 3 days ago, some nigga got shot up, called a girl a cow On my way to the store, and I saw my old homey Rick "Stee? What up, son? Come, I need medicine, my wife is sick" So I walked to the drugstore with him to catch up on the times Kids blastin' they boom box on the street droppin' rhymes "Wife? Don't tell me you married Angie, kid" his girl back then "Angel? Damn, son nobody told ya? Well remember when We was tellin' Angel to stop with them drugs she was doin'? I had to break it off, but she was crushed, started screwin' All these niggas runnin' around, we all thought she'd get AIDS Takin' all these bastards to bed, she'd go down to get paid One day she fucked this nigga Charley, and he wouldn't pay She hit him and he shot da fuck outta her in a drugged out state" I sat down hard on the fire hydrant and shed some tears for her I always knew that Angel had wings but thy never flew for her She was the wisest of us all, always kept us form goin' too far Now she's fuckin' gone and.. "Is that mothafucka behind bars?" "Bars? Johhny shot that fucka the day after, right in the neck" I wanted to know about others, but did I? Really? I held my breath I couldn't believe how things have changed since I been away Homeys turned crack addicts and gettin' killed.. I need to pray I went to school to learn, but the schoolin's back at home Well u know u gotta do what those niggas do, when in Rome I came back to reality, and I realized how much life can shift Came back and all I hear is bad news, nice homecoming gift I'm just thinkin' back at how lucky I was not to stay in the Stuy Attached, I missed out on some of the opportunity I had to fly College saved me, raised me higher, saved me from this place Some of my friends lost it early, but I'm still runnin' the race I went to school to learn, but the schoolin's back at home Well u know u gotta do what those niggas do, when in Rome I went to school to learn, but the schoolin's back at home Well u know u gotta do what those niggas do, when in Rome
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud Last edited by DarkLight : 07-14-04 at 09:39 AM. Reason: Spelling Error |
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07-12-04, 06:10 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: B09D C100
My first Open Mic.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud Last edited by DarkLight : 07-12-04 at 06:18 PM. |
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07-12-04, 06:13 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 7139 D3F4
damn hot homie,good structure,goor rhymes,good ideas,hot.9/10.make your chorus a tad longer though.
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07-12-04, 06:16 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: B09D C100
Thanks, man. Uppin for more feedback.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-12-04, 06:20 PM | #5 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: B09D C100
Uppin.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-12-04, 06:30 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: F04B 70DC
dayummmm dat shit was hot yo. everything was there and it was tyt PROPS
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07-12-04, 06:38 PM | #7 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: F04B 70DC
ya spit was very complex and made ya spit more interesting than others
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07-12-04, 07:00 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: B09D C100
Uppin, and thanks.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-12-04, 07:19 PM | #9 | |||||
[DeaTh-Is-NeaR!-]
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo man that was hot man i rate it 8.5/10
i agree wit that guy above you need yo chorus a lil longer
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07-12-04, 11:04 PM | #10 | ||||
Simply Dope
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IP: 4289 77F4
that was some hot shit son just make da chorus longer
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07-13-04, 10:18 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: B09D C100
Uppin
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-13-04, 04:26 PM | #12 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: B09D C100
Uppin
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-13-04, 09:23 PM | #13 | |||||
G.T.I.G.
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IP: 15CC 7900
yo that shit was hott dun keep it comin
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07-14-04, 09:38 AM | #14 | |||||
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IP: B09D C100
Thanks, and Uppin.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-14-04, 01:36 PM | #15 | |||||
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IP: C1DA C961
wow, this was a nice verse/song man, it was beautifully written and very raw and vivid, i could see everything unfold, nice detail, could see the imagery in my mind....keep it up
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