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Old 04-13-09, 07:42 PM   #1
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Semi Finals: Bobericc_Lyrics vs JTR

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Old 04-13-09, 08:20 PM   #2
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makes sense oneway didnt wanna put himself against either of us

hahaha good luck homie

i'm going 20... if you wanna do 30, i'd be down for that too
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Old 04-13-09, 11:39 PM   #3
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yo im checking 20 is cool
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Old 04-16-09, 04:34 PM   #4
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I'm taking this man, its been real!
wish me luck next round

I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up
I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one
better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum
this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks
and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch!
lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech,
talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING
your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed
see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku
squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion
and the day your dope bitch..
..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting!
depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall
just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all
my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money
I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three!
wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast
bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag
ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay
posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say..


hahaa theres my 20 J.
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Old 04-17-09, 02:04 PM   #5
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You wanna challenge me? On MY homesite? Oh I don't think so bitch

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL vs. me in the KORV3 tournament
Keep saying that you're the best, you're gonna win. Quit being posh
You're joshin' us, but can't you see? No one ever likes to be Josh..ed


I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck...
But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of
(I wonder why?)
You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch
If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium
^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard?
His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper
And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid
The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses
I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal
For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's
You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it
TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it
See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes
But sure i'll wish you luck your next round
...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time
Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick
& ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits
You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute
It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you
I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg
Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum
...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob

They call me Jack The Ripper for a reason. I murder whores.
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Old 04-17-09, 02:49 PM   #6
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I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up

LOL, great opener


I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one
better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum

barely descent
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this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks
and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch!

LOL, this was dope


lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech,
talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING

barely descent


your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed
see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku

Nice wordplay and creative


squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion
and the day your dope bitch..
..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting!

descent


depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall
just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all

descent


my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money
I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three!

LOL


wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast
bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag

barely descent

ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay
posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say

descent closer

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I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck...
But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of
(I wonder why?)

descent opener


You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch
If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium


LOL, this was dope



^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard?
His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper

LOL, this was dope too


And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid
The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses

LOL, good hit

I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal
For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's


barely descent


You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it
TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it

LOL, this actually made me laugh



See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes
But sure i'll wish you luck your next round
...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time


descent


Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick
& ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits


descent

You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute
It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you

no comment on religious stuff


I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg
Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum
...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob

descent closer


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This was a cool battler. Both people came hard, but I believe JTR had more quoteables and a more entertaining verese which lead to harder hitting connected punches.



Vote - JTR, for more consistency connecting harder punches
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I'm probably not allowed to vote, but JTR pretty much swept bob in this.
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Old 04-17-09, 08:37 PM   #8
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nah you cud vote.
good shit man...
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Old 04-17-09, 09:09 PM   #9
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I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up
this was cool. the multies were tight and the punch was a nice way to open strong

I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one
better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum
nah, i've seen this flipped very similar to this before so the fresh angle is lost on me personally

this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks
and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch!
I liked the idea in general, but I felt you fell short on the execution.. something is just off for me.

lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech,
talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING
i didn't like this

your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed
see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku
this was a cool flip, wordplay was nice and the samurai jack reference was solid

squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion
and the day your dope bitch..
..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting!
this was kinda funny, felt like you cud've done more with it though

depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall
just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all
it will work for those who haven't seen it, but i've seen josh battling for going on 3-4 years so i've seen pretty much every josh flip there is

my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money
I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three!
old school style with this punch, I can dig it

wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast
bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag
this wasn't that strong a punch

ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay
posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say..
this could've been a banger, the personal angle was there I just didn't like the wording and general execution of the punch. for me it just wasn't that aggressive enough.. if that makes sense, lol


Overall, a better verse than what I've seen before. It's all down to opinion and whilst some have appreciated most of your stuff.. for me you just haven't brought enough consistency in the past. It's like most verses I've seen you drop have had bangers mixed in with some sucky ass shit. This verse was tidy. It had some solid hits. Your multies were banging. The wordplay was strong in parts and you hit with some entertaining punches to. Overall though, some shit just lacked in execution. The concepts were good.. a couple I would've left out like the Joshin flip.. you probably shud've figured that would be played on him by now. The stride shit is probably fresh on here, I've seen it elsewhere so it lost appeal to me. A good verse though, more consistent and polished than others I've seen from you. I just think if you come more consistent and hit some more bangers you could be an even bigger threat.



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I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck...
But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of
(I wonder why?)
nah, you didn't use the quote well enough and this just comes off as simplistic. I can dig the swag, but there was really nothing else to this punch

You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch
If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium
nope! this has got to be recycled. I've seen this shit before. it may be a REALLY similar flip... either way, its not good in my eyes because I've seen it before

^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard?
His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper
the wordplay was pretty cool here, nothing more

And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid
The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses
underscore was cool.. this was a decent enough flip, but cud've been better

I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal
For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's
lol, sorry.. but I still ain't tired of seeing Final get ridiculed.. this was a cool way of flipping that shit and using it against bob.. and its relevant to

You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it
TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it
lmao, this was tight.. the comic value was strong and swag was nice to

See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes
But sure i'll wish you luck your next round
...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time
misdirection is cool, swag is there... wording could be stronger

Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick
& ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits
ehh, this was cool I guess

You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute
It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you
rofl, I laughed at this.. its fresh to me, but I get the feeling a concept like this has to have been flipped before

I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg
Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum
...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob
ehhh, head bob.. nah.. it just don't work for me

Not your strongest verse, not even close. I have to admit, every time I read a verse from you I am disappointed. ROFL. That's not to say they suck, you always make me laugh. I just still compare everything to that weedhead verse you dropped back in the day.. and that still reigns supreme as my all-time favorite JTR verse. I felt you came stronger, there was more of an attacking element in your verse. Also, I am a big fan of swag and misdirection and you incorporated all that into your verse. You had the comedy that I come to expect, I got some laughs. That geico shit was fucking hilarious and the jesus nailed shit. I can't believe I haven't seen that before seeing as though I've been battling across the net for some years now. Overall, I felt you were more consistent and just displayed a more polished verse. Bob had some solid hits, but I felt yours were just a little harder and that is what gives you the win here. I should deduct points for that newclear shit though.. but bob had the stride shit so it sorta balanced shit out for me.


VOTE: JTR

for a stronger verse. good battle though.
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Man, only two votes.

This ain't even a battle involving me and I think it sucks that it's only got two votes. Fucking slack ass motherfuckers need to get off they asses.
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I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up
this was ok, wasn't that dope though
I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one
better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum
wasn't feeling
this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks
and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch!
pretty basic
lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech,
talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING
na
your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed
see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku
not real effective
squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion
and the day your dope bitch..
..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting!
lol, not bad
depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall
just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all
not bad
my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money
I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three!
na
wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast
bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag
was ok
ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay
posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say..
ok I guess

never had a real blow away line, some small ones.


I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck...
But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of
(I wonder why?)
wasn't feeling
You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch
If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium
this was ok, wording wasn't perfect though
^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard?
His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper
not bad
And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid
The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses
this was cool
I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal
For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's
no
You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it
TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it
lol, wasn't bad kinda basic
See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes
But sure i'll wish you luck your next round
...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time
not feeling
Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick
& ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits
na
You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute
It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you
this was ok generic though
I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg
Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum
...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob
not bad worrding was off though


not a one sided battle at all, JTR had some petter punches but also nothing really dope/


vote JTR
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