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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

check..........

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

20 lines... open wide

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I don't care, I havn't started yet.

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

Y'all musta thought I was joking when I said I was winning this. Time to make you take me serious.

You need to learn how to rap, study is better
Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor
Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal
When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people
No racist!
I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead
Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head
Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure
Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better
Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper
A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's
Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth
If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out
That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin
An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum
I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin
When it comes to One Way?
I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin
Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better
Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders
Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast
In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats his boat

I always had this.

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When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman
Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin
He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me
I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th
It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope
Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke
Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me
Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat
You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me
There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s
Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me
But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E
Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay
Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays
His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start
He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart
He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such
The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut
This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing
He’s such a stupid bitch
………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

You need to learn how to rap, study is better
Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor
nah son, this was gay. too simple and really not a good concept to work with. poor opener.

Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal
When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people
No racist!
ran from the fuzz like black people... i've seen that type of concept flipped way better. this was too predictable.

I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead
Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head
the wordplay was average, execution was ehhhh

Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure
Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better
ehh, this was just weaksauce

Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper
A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's
its too, iunno.. weak, lol. it lacks any kind of creativity and just comes across as ass

Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth
If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out
wordplay was aight, punch ok

That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin
An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum
nah son.. i flipped the gladiator wordplay like 5 years ago and it sucked back then, it still sucks now.. its waayyy too forced.

I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin
When it comes to One Way?
I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin
i don't like it, you had the setup.. but the execution of the punchline was just overly simplistic cheese

Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better
Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders
the wordplay is too forced, the punch was ok.. but if you would've executed it in a way so as not to forced the wordplay it wud've been savage

Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast
In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats his boat
rofl, good closer.

what the hell. josh just DID NOT turn up for this battle. you started with some really weak ass shit. honestly, I'd say this verse just wreaks of a no-show 5 minute keystyle. there was a severe lack of any real creativity. that typical josh humor was missing and the execution of punches in general was simply lackluster. its like you didn't care or something. i don't get it. you talked like you was gonna stomp the comp in this, then you got to the final and drop straight ass. you had nothing in my eyes until the locust shit, then after that you fell off again. then you finished with a solid closer. its like the closer was nice and if the rest of your verse matched that for quality you probably would be the guaranteed winner.


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When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman
Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin
i get where you were going, it didn't come off for me though.

He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me
I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th
I actually liked this. the flips on his name have come fast and heavy and this one just seems fresh to me. i don't recall ever seeing it, but I have the feeling it has been done on him. its fresh in my eyes, so cool shit.

It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope
Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke
too simple. relevance was good. but you killed the effect of the punch with poor wording.

Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me
Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat
lol, its funny because its true

You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me
There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s
nah, this was garbo and I think you know it

Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me
But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E
it was a good attempt, but didn't come off for me

Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay
Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays
hell no, this is MEGA PLAYED

His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start
He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart
nah, I don't like this types of punches

He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such
The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut
its kinda ok, doesn't really strike me as a banger but it has potential

This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing
He’s such a stupid bitch
………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants
nah, weak ass closer

well its hard to know if one way came with the good shit here because he dropped after josh and lets face it, josh's verse was just poor in every sense of the word. I thought you had a bit more of a personal vibe to your verse and you tried to be a bit more creative and in a couple of punches it came off. overall your consistency let you down. your verse had a few ups and downs. still though, you had a couple of nice hits. the J son flip has a sense that its been done before.. but in the spirit of things, I let it slide because it was fresh to me. you should lose points though for that jack in the box shit, GODDAMN!! the fly-e shit and haircut shit had potential, nothing more. that reach for the belt shit was cool because of the truth behind it. I gotta say that for me you got this because you seemed hungrier for the win.


overall, this battle was fucking garbo. too many wack punches for it to be anything special. sorry for the harshness. josh just came with nothing, which is a shame because he could've walked this battle had he really tried. one way brought enough to win and gets it pretty handily for just being the more creative and aggressive of the two.

VOTE: ONE WAY

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they will...

oneway, is there a rule that only participants of this tourney can vote?

we should just make it that anyone on this site who isnt an herb can vote, and then post the link in lyracist lounge asking for some honest votes.. close it by next monday..

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word, do it up for sure, if it's a legit vote it shouldn't matter who it comes from, unless it's a bunch of random new peolpe that show up all the sudden to vote, they can fuck themselves.

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

^ indeed my friend, read the bold.

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i'll vote on this if it dont matter if i was in!thats why its so inactive cuz no one on this site votes on anything hardly.

lol more people need to stop saying that they will vote, and actually just vote.

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calm down my young friend heres the vote...

You need to learn how to rap, study is better
Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor
Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal
When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people
No racist!
I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead
Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head
Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure
Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better
Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper
A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's
Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth
If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out
That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin
An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum
I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin
When it comes to One Way?
I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin
Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better
Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders
Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast
In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats

thought you would have come more harder a few good punches, the gladheateher punch was definatly the best in there for me.the only thing that was missing was hard hitting personals which would have made this!

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When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman
Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin
He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me
I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th
It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope
Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke
Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me
Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat
You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me
There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s
Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me
But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E
Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay
Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays
His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start
He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart
He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such
The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut
This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing
He’s such a stupid bitch
………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants

a good all round verse,but some punches not as hard as they could have been.but this was backed up with some real nice personals.the best ones were the ninja one and the fly e one.

to say this was a final it wasnt the best ive seen thought JTR could have come wayyyy harder cuz ive seen him do it before.just lacked a little.

v/one way

ill let it count, but you need to learn how to vote a lot better... that was wack

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