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Old 08-12-05, 02:10 PM   #16
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i'm not swaying dummy, if i'm swaying, then so are you, idiot.
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Old 08-12-05, 03:30 PM   #17
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matter fact i was gonna let da vote stay but king solo said i cant vote in his battle....so he cant vote in mine..
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Old 08-12-05, 07:15 PM   #18
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nope, too late, sorry, shoulda stated that at the begining of the battle, you can't just take out his vote cuz it was against you, especially after you just let it slide, lmfao.
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Old 08-12-05, 08:52 PM   #19
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hmm,....i kno i can't vote but heres my take
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headgames,some real original concepts but some were
on the weaker side of the witty meter if ya nah sayin
2nd last bar was one of my favourites...
overall good verse for consistentcy n wordplay was well worded
along with your punches actually being very direct in most cases.
good verse........ good creativity.
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marv,flow was choppy in areas, some punches were ok but stretched out
way to far to be effective, you seem to put to much filler into your
verse to keep the reader interested throughout ya bars n verse..
alot of ya concepts are played n recycled n flipped but still recognizable
n do not have a witty apeal to them any more....
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headgames easily took this imo........pc
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 08-13-05, 02:01 AM   #20
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word then, 10-0 me
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Old 08-13-05, 02:08 AM   #21
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v / jtr;;;;;;;;;;
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Old 08-13-05, 02:35 AM   #22
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ok then , it's 2-0 me...
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Old 08-13-05, 03:53 PM   #23
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I vote on almost everyones battle, and no one comes and gives an honest vote back, wtf
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Old 08-13-05, 04:21 PM   #24
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Back again? And your skills still aint up to par
Your wack, and it's no joke... well actually... you are
But Marv was killin cats for a while, leaving kids dismantled
Remember when he called all of TE out!
...& got whored by EC in the first battle
Lol @ korv, wack fuck, my punches will leave you whored...
& make your ears ring so hard, you'll answer the front door
Wats the score? 2-0? & again i'm KO'ing you, your going down honestly
Cuz third times a charm, and Marv is def. falling for me
Just hit the ground and wait for the count, cock
And since we always argue, i'm 'bout to blow your top
Alright, let's clown his writing now, your fucking retarded B
But I spelled like that too
...back in grade 3
No one likes you, all of RV clowns this guy, shit
But your not the laughing stalk of RV
...your more like the root of it
You aint doing shit off the net, you can't get a deal
Marvs lines are all bananas cuz his verse hasn't had apeal

vs

we battlin 4 da 3rd time...rappin on a website's da only way dis herb shyne.
they call him head "GaMES" cuzz he has "TROUBLE" makin his words ryhme.
ppl gas'd him like he really just might blow,oh jacks just missin a tite flow.
he sent his demo 2 a 50 label's...got a call
his manger said 'i got good news i just saved money switchin da geico'
(as stretched as it is, funny)
dis kid's mess..you JaCK THE lier who'd you eva RiP(PER) in text??????
still droppin wack barz guess u like "nice teacher's" just dont "give a F
4,462 post...ya rec. 2-2 honestly how do u remain proud?.wit ya lame style.
u so ugly dat even if u got drafted 2 "cincinatti" u still couldn't "bang-gals"
neva seen em say he's workin on audio's...either usin cool edit or pro tools.
u a "crossdresser & homo" all u care about is "drag n ballz" ima call u "gokuu
(*chuckles*)

v/jack.......meh, better flow, more creative.....marv came with some played/boring shit....not really hard hitting stuff........but it was a decent battle...props to both
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Old 08-13-05, 07:37 PM   #25
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3-0, now you can finally STFU
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Old 08-13-05, 09:52 PM   #26
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jack
u had some good shit but it seemed like marv out lined evry thing i didnt like bout it...i suppose he got that from battling u twice...ur style was choppy and unattractive to me as da reader...u got me searchin for tha rhyme...but still good

marv
ur shit was funny, u had coo punches and wordplay...good flow too....way more consistent and enjoyable

v/ marvjay

good battle
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Old 08-13-05, 10:42 PM   #27
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V/ Marv....
his verse was pretty witty... i didnt htink he would take this at first, i was kinda shocked... i read both verses twice and went by punches that stood out and marv's shit stood out more. his humor was what won this shit, his verse was pretty funny.
this wass my fav line
we battlin 4 da 3rd time...rappin on a website's da only way dis herb shyne.
they call him head "GaMES" cuzz he has "TROUBLE" makin his words ryhme.
this won tha battle for marv... jtr came kinda weak this time. i got all ya wordplay homie, dont get me wrong... i liked some of ya lines, it seemed like u had some good wordplay in almost every line...
this was ya best "No one likes you, all of RV clowns this guy, shit
But your not the laughing stalk of RV
...your more like the root of it" i liked that shit but i dont think it was enough to win tha battle...
V/ Marv? lmao... no (?)
 
Old 08-15-05, 06:44 PM   #28
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Jack The Ripper wins.
MarvJay loses.
 
Old 08-15-05, 06:44 PM   #29
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Old 08-15-05, 06:45 PM   #30
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Moved to Closed Battles.
 
 


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