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Old 01-18-04, 11:36 PM   #1
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u fucked my life up
u screwed it over
is it tough love
or is it really over


ya fukin destroyed my life and ya got yaself hurt at the end
you deserv it and thats what i said and fo real love i wont send
im tired of the bullshit you put me thru im stoppin this shit
and i kno i drop this shit like a bird and i know this is it
im almost up to my knees in clompliants too much bitchin
im started to wonder if i shouyld do it back all the bickerin
and im not innocent but im true wen i say its fuckin done with
and you'll know whats up when i say "pack your bags and split"
i hope ya run into a pile a yourself i mean some of that bull shit
you don't deserve this? just like i dont deserve fuckin you
when i say u deserve this u fuckin deserve this cuz what i say iz tru

u fucked my life up
u screwed it over
is it tough love
or is it really over
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Old 01-18-04, 11:38 PM   #2
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hope to get some good feed back and this shit took me bout 10 minutes soo if something iz messed up tell me
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Old 01-19-04, 12:20 AM   #3
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umm feedback??
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Old 01-19-04, 01:36 AM   #4
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F-E-E-D B-A-C-K
ill fuckin do urs
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Old 01-19-04, 02:54 AM   #5
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fuckin feedback pleez
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Old 01-19-04, 03:43 AM   #6
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Old 01-19-04, 03:47 AM   #7
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too simple..need better vocab..flow was ugly..and also simple..not a great peice..but it's not horrible..over..this was equal to some newbie shit..5/10
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Old 01-19-04, 04:48 PM   #8
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