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Old 07-11-05, 02:25 AM   #1
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L.I vs. TrooP

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8 Lines Minimum
Decide on the exact amount in your check ins.

Checks Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday
(All times are eastern)

Go read the rules thread if you don't know them.

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Old 07-11-05, 03:46 PM   #2
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Old 07-12-05, 03:55 AM   #3
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8 2 Rip...No Problem
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Old 07-12-05, 05:42 PM   #4
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Tiger Woods would even club this herb n he's rollin soft
we all want Tee Off the site. like the 1st hole of golf
ill fuck yah ass up. u aint gangsta to this site
only time TP's all over the hood.....is on mischief night
u aint worth my time son. watch as i stun this freak
cuz u the only kid i kno retired...that still battles once a week
he aint ever got a girl. u cant pimp, stop it mayne
shit the only time T-Mac's is at Houston Rocket games



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Old 07-12-05, 08:39 PM   #5
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Lol...Vet?....A Hasbeen....

ok Look

Li's a Vet? Ya that Fell Off..8 Linez.Neva seen u SpitTin 10
Flyweights. "Respec" You cuz your Rv's only "Senior" Citizen
Ya Knowledge turnt Garbage..If i Lose.They polled all Wrong
Damn LI you Been here So Long..u Need Assistance 2 Log On
Your Far From Hood Last Time you Seen White..U was Ashy
LI Couldnt Stick Out if His Name was Switched with his Avy
Maybe you'd get Acknowledged and Maybe get a lil Focused
Cuz if i Handed u "Talent" LI would be Like I "Cant Hold This"

..Now Who's the Vet?

*Nuff Said*


*His avy has a thong stickin out*
*Under his User title says "Cant Hold this"
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Old 07-13-05, 09:56 AM   #6
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u aint worth my time son. watch as i stun this freak
cuz u the only kid i kno retired...that still battles once a week

vs

nothing

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Old 07-13-05, 10:07 AM   #7
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Tiger Woods would even club this herb n he's rollin soft
we all want Tee Off the site. like the 1st hole of golf

Str8

ill fuck yah ass up. u aint gangsta to this site
only time TP's all over the hood.....is on mischief night

lol

u aint worth my time son. watch as i stun this freak
cuz u the only kid i kno retired...that still battles once a week

str8

he aint ever got a girl. u cant pimp, stop it mayne
shit the only time T-Mac's is at Houston Rocket games

lol

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Li's a Vet? Ya that Fell Off..8 Linez.Neva seen u SpitTin 10
Flyweights. "Respec" You cuz your Rv's only "Senior" Citizen

Ok

Ya Knowledge turnt Garbage..If i Lose.They polled all Wrong
Damn LI you Been here So Long..u Need Assistance 2 Log On

meh

Your Far From Hood Last Time you Seen White..U was Ashy
LI Couldnt Stick Out if His Name was Switched with his Avy

k

Maybe you'd get Acknowledged and Maybe get a lil Focused
Cuz if i Handed u "Talent" LI would be Like I "Cant Hold This"

Ight

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Old 07-13-05, 12:50 PM   #8
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Ya Knowledge turnt Garbage..If i Lose.They polled all Wrong
Damn LI you Been here So Long..u Need Assistance 2 Log On
Your Far From Hood Last Time you Seen White..U was Ashy
LI Couldnt Stick Out if His Name was Switched with his Avy
Maybe you'd get Acknowledged and Maybe get a lil Focused
Cuz if i Handed u "Talent" LI would be Like I "Cant Hold This"

vs.

nothing

V/ Troop
 
Old 07-13-05, 03:56 PM   #9
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u aint worth my time son. watch as i stun this freak
cuz u the only kid i kno retired...that still battles once a week
VS.
Maybe you'd get Acknowledged and Maybe get a lil Focused
Cuz if i Handed u "Talent" LI would be Like I "Cant Hold This"

I gotta go with Troop on this one cause the rest of the verses I honestly wasn't really feeling cause i've heard the punches before. sorry

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God damn it Troop i meant troop
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Old 07-13-05, 04:40 PM   #11
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2-2. Coo closer troop.
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Old 07-13-05, 07:37 PM   #12
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wtf @ voting here? lol, RV votes always make me smile.

Tiger Woods would even club this herb n he's rollin soft
we all want Tee Off the site. like the 1st hole of golf
You flipped a played line into a personal, it's still played either way dude
ill fuck yah ass up. u aint gangsta to this site
only time TP's all over the hood.....is on mischief night
This concept had the potential to be dope, but you only turned it into a "meh" punch
u aint worth my time son. watch as i stun this freak
cuz u the only kid i kno retired...that still battles once a week
not really played, but kinda simple, the personal did hit though and it was a decent punch
he aint ever got a girl. u cant pimp, stop it mayne
shit the only time T-Mac's is at Houston Rocket games
Concept was dope, cept "got no game" lines are almost played out, wordplay was iffy, but you pulled it off, good punch
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Played out...on RV? Pff come on JTR.
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Old 07-13-05, 07:46 PM   #14
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Oops, anyways here's my breakdown on troops.

Li's a Vet? Ya that Fell Off..8 Linez.Neva seen u SpitTin 10
Flyweights. "Respec" You cuz your Rv's only "Senior" Citizen
if your refering to a spectical line, as in those one eye glasses things, then this is a played out line, and the personal hardly hit
Ya Knowledge turnt Garbage..If i Lose.They polled all Wrong
Damn LI you Been here So Long..u Need Assistance 2 Log On
too simple, personal didn't connect
Your Far From Hood Last Time you Seen White..U was Ashy
LI Couldnt Stick Out if His Name was Switched with his Avy
decent, simple but decent, the personal connected a bit
Maybe you'd get Acknowledged and Maybe get a lil Focused
Cuz if i Handed u "Talent" LI would be Like I "Cant Hold This"
this was "meh", try not to use quotes that people said and take a part of it and make it rhyme in your line, it's wack, but this was from the member title and was almost a decent personal

This battle was close actually, anyways, i'm just giving feedback not voting.
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Old 07-13-05, 07:48 PM   #15
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Quote:
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Played out...on RV? Pff come on JTR.


when you refered Tee to T as in Troop and then worded the concept it was decent, it's not that that was played, the whole golf tee off rhyme is played, i've seen it before, and on RB, I don't wanna look for links.
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