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CRuZiFiYaH 0 0%
rellik 5 100.00%
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Old 06-07-06, 12:39 AM   #1
rellik
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rellik vs CRuZiFiYaH

IP: 6199 494C

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Go head busta.

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Old 06-07-06, 12:40 AM   #2
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CRuZiFiYaH has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-06 12:40 AM.
 
Old 06-07-06, 01:10 AM   #3
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Old 06-07-06, 11:53 PM   #4
rellik
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Aye -

Check the status bitch, i'll leave you cut up in sections...
Surprised you can type while ya thumbs stuck up in rectums!
I'm begging this cat to chill, before I sever his back for real...
Last I heard, Cruzifiyah was pleasuring fags for meals!
Nigga, you're past pathetic, I'm spastic, i'll smash ya head in...
An after this battle, i'm sure ya gonna need to change ya plastic bedding!
You pansy fuck, your best position’s on ya elbows and knees…
More nuts hang from ya lip than skirts on Seminole chiefs!
Kid wanted to step, this bitch must be losing his damn sight…
Attracted to Scots, and kilts, Cruzi enjoys blowin’ on bag pipes!
You can’t be serious, you battle me then you choose to die…
I’m a Jew and your Jesus…this bastard just got crucified…


-Blah, it's been a hot minute...a very hot minute.
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Old 06-08-06, 12:04 AM   #5
CRuZiFiYaH
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Pull out blades An u Move Fuckin-Get-SlicedLook Bitch im Buckin-Ya-Twice Werd of advice dun fuck up cz im Nothin-But-Nice..!!
CZ When i spark~rounds it'll leave this "mark~down" like a Reduction-In-Price..!!

I'm Teachin-Horror!! fuckin with Cruz? i'll leave yuh Pieces-Tortured..!!
This Chick a fake so when i clap er she "Dysphonia" Like Speech-Disorders..!! (dies phonier)

Pick up the Guage an Ill let the Same-Shells-Clap-Herbs Shots at er head and leave her Brain-Cells-Fractured..!! This bitch couldn't be a "killer" with her Name-Spelled-Backwards..!!

I'll Drill-Yuh-When-Sprayers-Spark take a L cz Listen i'm Nice~as~fuck an ur not Iller-So-Play-Yuh-Part..!!
an them semi u'll light~u~up like u was Afraid-Of-Dark Cruz u'll have er Get "murdered on R.V" like "killers" In-A-Trailor-Parks..!!

U like bad kissin the was u Suck-In-Spits Cz u ain Nuffin-Bitch..!!
U ain phasin me cz u like the dudes who fuck u analy ya drops is FUckin-Shit..!!
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Old 06-08-06, 01:38 PM   #6
Yvonne
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Voted For: rellik

lol...tight verse here...

he had a lot of humor,punches kept on coming harder and hader...irony was also applyed...he also had some multiz..which aided him to having a nice flow...yah i was madly feeling your metaz and the vocab: simple but mixed with your mets they turned out nu and tight..yeah concepts were clare and structure was gd too...you had a decent verse and unlike ur opponent...he didnt have punches to me...

yo cruz...you shudnt space ur bars cos it cuts off your flow...and in a battle dawg i guess you are to 'diss' to 'kill' ...not spit out things u prolly wud neva get hold of...you just make me imply that you are forming(i.e pretending) which to us all on rv means being a kid...a stupid one...and dont fill in so much words in a bar/line cos if it wasnt for xperience to me ur whole verse wudnt have had not even a rhymed line...you really shud learn from rellik...no hate just advicing you!


..wun...
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Old 06-08-06, 02:51 PM   #7
CRuZiFiYaH
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wat the fuck is this clit ridin shit her drop was ass point blank get the fuck outta here this site is wack man
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Old 06-08-06, 04:33 PM   #8
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^^typical xample of nubees that wunt accept a creative critic

ugh..
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Old 06-08-06, 08:38 PM   #9
rellik
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Haha, chill Cruzifiyah, Yvonne ain't even know I was a girl.

-Uppin.
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Old 06-11-06, 05:05 PM   #10
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Voted For: rellik

Pull out blades An u Move Fuckin-Get-SlicedLook Bitch im Buckin-Ya-Twice Werd of advice dun fuck up cz im Nothin-But-Nice..!!
CZ When i spark~rounds it'll leave this "mark~down" like a Reduction-In-Price..!!
nerp
I'm Teachin-Horror!! fuckin with Cruz? i'll leave yuh Pieces-Tortured..!!
This Chick a fake so when i clap er she "Dysphonia" Like Speech-Disorders..!! (dies phonier)
eh
Pick up the Guage an Ill let the Same-Shells-Clap-Herbs Shots at er head and leave her Brain-Cells-Fractured..!! This bitch couldn't be a "killer" with her Name-Spelled-Backwards..!!
decent
I'll Drill-Yuh-When-Sprayers-Spark take a L cz Listen i'm Nice~as~fuck an ur not Iller-So-Play-Yuh-Part..!!
an them semi u'll light~u~up like u was Afraid-Of-Dark Cruz u'll have er Get "murdered on R.V" like "killers" In-A-Trailor-Parks..!!
nerp
U like bad kissin the was u Suck-In-Spits Cz u ain Nuffin-Bitch..!!
U ain phasin me cz u like the dudes who fuck u analy ya drops is FUckin-Shit..!!
nerp

Need to change ya structure up.. make that shit like rellik’s. Cus yo shit is just everyway bruh. But anyway, punches were there but you only had 1 good punch that landed and the rest were straight garbage. Keep elevating though.

Check the status bitch, i'll leave you cut up in sections...
Surprised you can type while ya thumbs stuck up in rectums!
eh
I'm begging this cat to chill, before I sever his back for real...
Last I heard, Cruzifiyah was pleasuring fags for meals!
okay
Nigga, you're past pathetic, I'm spastic, i'll smash ya head in...
An after this battle, i'm sure ya gonna need to change ya plastic bedding!
eh
You pansy fuck, your best position’s on ya elbows and knees…
More nuts hang from ya lip than skirts on Seminole chiefs!
decent
Kid wanted to step, this bitch must be losing his damn sight…
Attracted to Scots, and kilts, Cruzi enjoys blowin’ on bag pipes!
haha
You can’t be serious, you battle me then you choose to die…
I’m a Jew and your Jesus…this bastard just got crucified…
good closer

Did a decent shit on here rellik. Punches were there, and most of them landed, but there was just a couple that was eh... but overall you came on top in this battle. Punches landed and had an overall better verse than Cruz here.
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Old 06-12-06, 09:03 PM   #11
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This was feedback posted for rellik

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just checkin the pollson this one..................
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Old 06-13-06, 06:16 PM   #12
rellik
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Grazi Grazi....Now Up this so we can get it over with.
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Old 06-13-06, 11:56 PM   #13
CRuZiFiYaH
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wtf no wonder all the fuckin rapper on this site suck..1 u can have the win ban me or sumnthin this site is wack
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Old 06-15-06, 05:32 PM   #14
rellik
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Aye chill with it man. Haha, don't be a sore loser, just be cool.
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Old 06-18-06, 10:35 AM   #15
ElitE LyrIcIsT
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Voted For: rellik

neither verses hit very hard
but my vote goes to rellik
cruzifiyah u need to change ur structure cuz ur shit was hard to read,didnt have many hard hittin lines either

Best Lines:

Rellik:
You pansy fuck, your best position’s on ya elbows and knees…
More nuts hang from ya lip than skirts on Seminole chiefs!

Cruzifiyah:
Pick up the Guage an Ill let the Same-Shells-Clap-Herbs Shots at er head and leave her Brain-Cells-Fractured..!! This bitch couldn't be a "killer" with her Name-Spelled-Backwards..!!
 
 


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