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Old 07-30-06, 11:10 AM   #1
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45. pictureperfect2 (0-0) vs 46. Meters (0-0)

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Old 07-30-06, 02:21 PM   #2
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Old 08-03-06, 01:56 PM   #3
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word, that's fine
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Old 08-03-06, 03:12 PM   #4
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it's picture perfect how i deliver verses 'n sentence you to die slow
cuz i'm the main event. mark-the-amazing sound like a sideshow
pound his eyes closed..i know the psychoses of his thinking
only grapples with his demons, cuz submission get him kinky
yeah, i called you a faggot.. i think you justa bitch who claiming clout
cuz i saw this picture book..as a kid..and ripped the pages out
that means you just basic, pal..joined just two months after I did
and kempo think you just about getting to a level you know i've been
can't dry your eyes when my pen slice in, you nothing in my shadow
i'd size up the competition..but we ain't aloud to choose who we battle
so give it quits little bitch, homo says he's self-made solo standing
..telling mom to get out of ya hair when you split ends with the family

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Old 08-03-06, 06:22 PM   #5
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damn i was scared there for a minute.. lucky me u aint the same
cuz i thought i was battlin sumone good till i saw the er in ya name
think u a dope head? nah u a broke head..i'll kill u just for thinkin
dude u aint better than the rest just cuz u aint got a bed to sleep in
go get a plane ticket cuz yo ugly ass needs outta here dude
and be sure its stand by.......
...to make up for the girls that woudn't ever do that near you
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up
boy could shop wit usher.. cats on this site still ganna be like w/e
cuz meters seems wack no matter how good his jeans put together
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no need for the psh
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Old 08-03-06, 11:21 PM   #6
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uppitty...........
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Old 08-03-06, 11:24 PM   #7
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yeah, i called you a faggot.. i think you justa bitch who claiming clout
cuz i saw this picture book..as a kid..and ripped the pages out

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go get a plane ticket cuz yo ugly ass needs outta here dude
and be sure its stand by.......
...to make up for the girls that woudn't ever do that near you
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up


Yeah, this was weak. Meters dropped utter trash and then picture basically dropped what was needed to win this. That kilometer line was pretty ILL to. And the rest of your verse wasn't too bad... just some poor wording.

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Old 08-04-06, 12:35 AM   #8
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yeah, i called you a faggot.. i think you justa bitch who claiming clout
cuz i saw this picture book..as a kid..and ripped the pages out

^i thought that was a fiya nameplay...good shit but sadly thats all i was feeling from you =/

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damn i was scared there for a minute.. lucky me u aint the same
cuz i thought i was battlin sumone good till i saw the er in ya name
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up

good shit from PP that his verse was decent and had me flowing but those were the only hard hitters in ya verse son...but good battle
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Old 08-04-06, 03:46 AM   #9
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yeah, i called you a faggot.. i think you justa bitch who claiming clout
cuz i saw this picture book..as a kid..and ripped the pages out

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go get a plane ticket cuz yo ugly ass needs outta here dude
and be sure its stand by.......
...to make up for the girls that woudn't ever do that near you
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up


Yeah, this was weak. Meters dropped utter trash and then picture basically dropped what was needed to win this. That kilometer line was pretty ILL to. And the rest of your verse wasn't too bad... just some poor wording.

V/ - picture

if you would....
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pm the barz u thought i worded wrong.. it'd help me elevate... preciate it.. cuz i hate thinkin i got a dope concept and end up messin it up ya dig
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Old 08-04-06, 08:52 AM   #10
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only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up

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nothin....

meter's i really didn tlike ya verse it seemed u were forcin everything 2 ryhme and it wasn't workin...picture uhhh ya verse was ok i think u did word a bar wrong da rest joint but ur personal/punch won dis battle 4 u

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Old 08-05-06, 02:26 AM   #11
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can't dry your eyes when my pen slice in, you nothing in my shadow
i'd size up the competition..but we ain't aloud to choose who we battle
so give it quits little bitch, homo says he's self-made solo standing
..telling mom to get out of ya hair when you split ends with the family
(4)

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damn i was scared there for a minute.. lucky me u aint the same
cuz i thought i was battlin sumone good till i saw the er in ya name
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up

v/meters. I liked his 2 bars better then PP's 2 bars
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Old 08-05-06, 03:16 PM   #12
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yeah, i called you a faggot.. i think you justa bitch who claiming clout
cuz i saw this picture book..as a kid..and ripped the pages out
so give it quits little bitch, homo says he's self-made solo standing
..telling mom to get out of ya hair when you split ends with the family

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go get a plane ticket cuz yo ugly ass needs outta here dude
and be sure its stand by.......
...to make up for the girls that woudn't ever do that near you
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up


Meters...came iight..but some of yah shit just didnt hit as hard as u thought it was going to i suppose...picture just came harder and punches hit and what not

v/picture

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Old 08-05-06, 05:14 PM   #13
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Nothing

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go get a plane ticket cuz yo ugly ass needs outta here dude
and be sure its stand by.......
...to make up for the girls that woudn't ever do that near you
only 5 barz?.. muphucka u gotta be kiddin if u think thats enough
cuz i'll kilometer so much.. a 1000 of ya'll bitches couldn't measure up

Sorry Meters, not liking any of your bars...improve on your wording n shit, some lines were okish but not good enough to quote. Picture, those two bars were dope...

Vote - pictureperfect2 (still with that newbish name)...
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Old 08-06-06, 11:56 AM   #14
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pictureperfect2 wins 5-1.

pictureperfect2 wins (1-0)
Meters loses (0-1)
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