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01-22-06, 12:13 PM | #1 | |||||
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how does it feel(unfs track i just collabed)
IP: 8630 C252
top track its fiya
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=472818 links to feed http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2627604 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2627601
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01-22-06, 12:53 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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01-22-06, 02:14 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
com on sleeperz............................return favourz
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01-22-06, 02:31 PM | #4 | |||||
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aight listenin.......
dope beat, feelin it....... UNF-came in nicely, flow is tite, and delivery is pretty dope. volume level is just right, maybe a little too loud, quality is pretty much perfect. your lyrics are decent aswell im hearin alot of decent punchlines (the used ferrari line was dope! lol) trakk starr- flow is decent, delivery has improved alot. levels are perfect, quality is also good. lyrics are pretty good, although there were a couple of quite basic bars, the rollercoaster bar was pretty decent, i woz feelin that. yerr not much bad bout your verse really, other than i'd try and get more creative wit your punchlines nd shit. overall- this woz a decent track actually, not much i can complain about lol. i think i wud've made it longer actually, like spit 4 bars each for a 3rd verse or sumthin, but other than that this is a decent drop from you two. 8.5/10 Feed used 1/28/06 "On the mic"
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01-22-06, 02:35 PM | #5 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: C94D B08C
Thanks.....................................
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01-22-06, 02:45 PM | #6 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 3053 F660
unf....
getting better by the track man....i like the flow on this one better than your others...and your delivery....work on pronunciation....speak a lil more clearly...i mean..its not bad...just could be a bit clearer...thats my only complaint.. 2nd dude....be a bit more loud man...gotta work on your presence...this isnt bad....but your delivery and presence could be upped and this would be pretty good....
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01-22-06, 04:12 PM | #8 | ||||
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unf not feeling this verse lyrical wise really flow is on 97% of the tiem muuch improvement here
voice sounds like its deepening how cute lol hook who is this lol? trakk you almost sound like le when u come in jsut a little grimier lyrically ok flow was pretty tight both of you hit me up for a collab if ud like overall 6.8/10
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01-22-06, 05:46 PM | #9 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
thanx fer tha feed preciate it.................uppin
and i will hit u up
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01-22-06, 07:17 PM | #10 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
bumpeddddddddddddddddddddd
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01-23-06, 02:21 AM | #11 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: A23D ABD7
Word...Ima Throw A Track Your Way Thanks
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01-23-06, 05:19 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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01-23-06, 09:18 PM | #13 | |||||
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IP: 8630 C252
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01-23-06, 09:26 PM | #14 | |||||||
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IP: 8E7F 1337
yea the beats dope....ur flows hott....damn u droppin mad crazzy man....the metaphore are coo some kinda played but decent...i love the hook...defitnly a hott drop....8.5/10
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01-23-06, 09:37 PM | #15 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 8733 3D5C
UNF
Kids gettin better, his voice I really hate, it's so annoying. his flow was a bit better and so is the delivery but man you really sound like you force yourself to sound gangsta. stop that son. the hook was pretty dope, who ever did it sounded the best. 2nd cat voice is alright, doesn't sound forced at all. your flow was pretty good, and your pronounciation was solid. delivery is decent. the lyrics are weak....overal decent. track was decent. Feed used 1/23/06 "Real Talk ft. Snypa and Prozak"
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