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Old 11-26-05, 10:25 PM   #31
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Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppp
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Old 11-26-05, 10:43 PM   #32
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Voted For: L.I.

Well...kinda awkward battle here.
An obvious line differnce,but..as always,it's quality > quantity.L.I.'s lines were better,more creative,and str8 to the point.

Meta fore..you had some gay lines,like that baboon/mom line..i mean..wtf was that?That sounds like something an infant would say.And in ya' 1st bar..i really don't think losing an alias is considered a "tragic loss" to L.I...so that line was pretty weak.The audio shit had potential..but you didn't use it well..

L.I got this.

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Old 11-29-05, 01:27 AM   #33
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i know u bite my shit. man thats class
so give me my linebacker ill have to tackle yo ass
dont let ya heart fail. the pain ull feel is brought to u through me
cuz this kid'll be on an IV quicker than the third sequel to movies

vs.

nothing

Seriously, LI's first 2 bars were decent wordplay, metapho came with nothing good imo, simple bars, and really streched, so v/LI
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Old 11-29-05, 08:57 AM   #34
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know u bite my shit. man thats class
so give me my linebacker ill have to tackle yo ass
^^decent opener, good wording
dont let ya heart fail. the pain ull feel is brought to u through me
cuz this kid'll be on an IV quicker than the third sequel to movies
^^this was koo
this guy is complete trash. tally my votes and score em
cause M comes wacker then all of the verses in our cypher forum
^^ok, nothin special
just leave the site. pick a new home and move please
RV will be scared of your comeback like Tedy Bruschi's
^^nah, i got it but it lacked a punch
fucking lame bitch. get a life, dont start to sob
and when i call you a mophead i aint insulting your job
^^lil chuckle here

your verse was short was some decent punches
good wording throughout, a coouple punches connected
wish you had put more effort/time into it though.


You've been banned on one account, and humiliated on the other*
A Loss can be a tragic event, but your experienced, so you wont mind another!
^^ok, nothing great, pretty simple
Dog, i'm like ya own mother...in the simple fact I Own you Brother
we all got a trick up our sleeve
........but i never expected your 'Lethal Weapon' to be danny glover
^^nah, not feeling this punch
Ya raps in a slump-huh?...well maybe i can be of some assistance...
when its time to brawl...Your like new cellphones...you try to keep your ''distance''
^^ok, but not connecting well
If you drop a hot punch, its a mis-print, or our eyes actin all deseptive
so you go and tell us the true meanin'...and the mistake was being corrective
^^eh, wack
so in other words...you rappin hot shit...once in a blue moon...
even ya mom spankin your ass for tryin...she even nicknamed you baboon...
^^lol wtf,..not good
i'ma make like a balloon...so you can go right ahead and BLOW ME
People told me you was nice...but then again, here's what they Showed me!
^^lol, thats old, couldve been worded way better
Man you know me, homie..And maybe i'm being unfair provinding your worst link...
But i'm not the one to blame, there is consicences when you put up a mic and dont THINK.
^^lol,...good shit
Maybe ya just took a drink, or had a little toot...and decided ya didnt wannabe on mute
Whatever it was, I just say you saw your own foot and decided to shoot!!**
^^im feelin this
All ya flirtin is cute....I guess the rumour of me n tha Q got you Excited...
Now dudes all pissed off and cussin like a girl...'cause he wasnt Invited.
^^um, ok,..thats scary yo
Your rhymes? I can ignite-it...You need my help, son...Don't fight-it...
Scared kid!...the doc orderd elevation...So go head and try it, ya never know...YOU MIGHT LIKE-IT.
^^ok,..not a great closer
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your verse was hella stretched n couldve done with some trimmin, i think 1 punch connected, but your verse was personal n kudos for that but it just didnt seem up to par w/L.I's verse.....
L.I, ive seen alot of variations of those lines b4,
try to come more original w/ya text next time
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what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 11-29-05, 03:20 PM   #35
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^ word thanks for the vote bro.

upping for the final vote..........
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Old 02-02-06, 07:51 PM   #36
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Old 02-03-06, 08:53 PM   #37
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Voted For: L.I.

for quality not quantity
...return wit a vote...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220983
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