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Old 10-05-04, 07:23 PM   #1
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Chorus:
What the fuck nigga, i aint talkin to you
ur # 1 on the list of biteches i aint listenin to
Cuz all niggas like are all talk and no action
And to me all u are, is a simple distraction

Verse1:

Ive done it again, pray to the lord, ill keep doin it
Diesel is on it again, yall niggas cant ruin it
Ive come up to the top, comin straight from the bottom
Most of yall all, talk, some will do, and ill spot em
dont get mad, cuz my my suit costs more then ur house
Ya i earnd right to speak, and i got south loud mouth
Cuz im kinda just like the tikkin bomb
talk shit ..tik..tik...tik... BOOOOOOOOM!
all i hear is the talk, i dont see niggas spitting it
theres the crown of the south, im the only one fittin it
Motherfucker step back, or fall back, how u want it?
And when u drop ur first single,im only gon taunt it
Come on bitch says sumthin now or spit it whatever
Im the Mouth of The South, and i aint stayin here forever
ive done done it again, spit another one, whoa
cuz the south is in the house, nigga fo show


Chorus:
What the fuck nigga, i aint talkin to you
ur # 1 on the list of biteches i aint listenin to
Cuz all niggas like are all talk and no action
And to me all u are, is a simple distraction

Verse2:
In this shit aint no lie, im the man of my word
and please dont say shit to me, cuz ull be seing the lord
Yall can be on my case, but u still cant do nuthing
Im here spittin this shit, while yall week skills rusting
Dont play with the fire, cuz u bound to get burned
and when ill make u step back it will be lesson learned
Bitch its Diesel in here, and yall cant to shit
most wont say shit, cuz of my 9 milli gat
Ive done taken a break now im back so step off
Ya cant claim that ure hard when we know that u're soft
im still doing my thing, im still an ultimate hustla
well if im being that u can be ultimate busta


Chorus:
What the fuck nigga, i aint talkin to you
ur # 1 on the list of biteches i aint listenin to
Cuz all niggas like are all talk and no action
And to me all u are, is a simple distraction
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Old 10-05-04, 07:43 PM   #2
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In this shit aint no lie, im the man of my word
and please dont say shit to me, cuz ull be seing the lord
^lol nice...

damn this was pretty nice, i liked ya chorus too.. but uhm there were a few fall off points but in general, nice job..
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Old 10-05-04, 07:57 PM   #3
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thanks, yeah i didnt write for a while but i tried. still lookin forward to our colalb and every one has to peep that and maybe this
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Old 10-05-04, 08:18 PM   #4
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dis was da shit, good flow good chorus, good everything. dawg dis song was nice, keep it up doe
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Old 10-05-04, 09:01 PM   #5
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AIGHT GOOD PIECE HERE DA FLOW WAS AN LIL MESSED UP BUT ITS COOL

U HAD FLOW AND U MADE YO POINT NICE SHIT MAYNE

DA BEST LINE I LIKED WAS

In this shit aint no lie, im the man of my word
and please dont say shit to me, cuz ull be seing the lord
^^^^^^^^^ HOT LINE RIGHT DER

KEEP IT UP MAYNE

REMEMBA STAY ON POINT KEEP DA FLOW GOING

AND READ YO PIECE BEFO U POST IT

MAKE SHO IT SOUND RIGHT FLOW RIGHT

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Old 10-05-04, 09:24 PM   #6
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thnax people, im still here uppin
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Old 10-05-04, 10:03 PM   #7
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LOL some good shit its iight you had good verse in ya shit ddint like the chourus that much.. very nice peice of open mic.. keep up
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Old 10-06-04, 12:59 AM   #8
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thanx all uppin
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Old 10-06-04, 03:18 PM   #9
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