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05-09-05, 02:05 PM
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I Am
IP: D135 D6AF
Believe it Or Not i am that Bottle of Whiskey that you Guzzle And i am them Dentals in that Pit Bull thats Unda tha Muzzle And i am the Panic Attack In ya Chest when u near Danger I am, the Hollo Tips that Emerge UnSilently from that Chamber Suprisengly I am that 6 x 9 Solid Steel and Metal Bar Cell And i am them Temptations and Sins that Sent you to Hell I Am the Very Reason that there now Is No Superior Justice I Am them Demonic Thoughts when you Bout to Bust Fists I Am them Feelins that Were Left at ya Loved Ones Grave I Am the Knees that Gave out now you have no Nba Fate I Am the Vengience that you Start Feelin in your Sentence I Am The Key'd Drops and the "Pre" in them Pre~Writtens I Am the Fists that Help you To Deliver ya Under Punches I Am the Riffle that Scopes that Dear for ya Hunter Lunches I Am the Undisputed Attitude of Arroungance and Cocky'sss I Am them Mister T's...Ivan Drago's and Even all 5 Rocky'ssss I Am them Steel Structures that couldnt Fight the Towers I Am the Podeum and the Fist when the Panthers ........Said...................................... ..."Fight the Power"
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05-09-05, 07:02 PM
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IP: D135 D6AF
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05-10-05, 02:49 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 28AD 5545
wow, very emotional, vivid piece, i liked this,it is powerful, keep dropping.1
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05-11-05, 09:42 AM
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Divine Ascension
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IP: D0A3 C3B6
ehh it was aiight. i dont find "I am" poems that interesting anymore. sum of your metas where left too open and the meaning seemed distant. not sure where you were trying to go with this piece. i mean u had sum nice lines no doubt sum nice i magery but overall just wasnt feeling the concept. but keep doin u u got talent
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 -Transcending The Heavens- I am before before... Before death is eternity, After death is eternity. There is no death, only eternity. And I be riding the wings of eternity...  ___________________________________________  3 Poems.:.3 Features.:.3 Weeks Consecutively I'm a Bad Man |
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05-12-05, 09:43 PM
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IP: 7077 160E
yeah, it was okay, the i am poem's are getting a little cliche, and it reminds me of the poem "Drama" by FlowMental on Def Jam Poetry.. and a little random bits out there.. but it wasnt bad
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