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02-17-04, 12:14 AM | #2 | |
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this was pretty dope, excpet it's a topic from the Raven by Poe. I think you did that on purpose though, just kidna like a remake. i wish you added maybe a different twist at the end, just not like the one by Poe. but he repetitions were good, and i liked hte iamgery it showed very nicely,a nd i liked the whole raven symbolism.
nice job
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