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09-29-04, 11:48 PM | #1 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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Fuck The Industry
IP: 85E7 2668
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/revokeaimusic.htm
did this quick....my throat was dry so i lose some momentum at times..
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09-30-04, 12:10 AM | #2 | |||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
no doubt... good to see u droppin again, you have great emotion for someone gettin into this- but you have to find bars your comfortable spitting so you can flow, cuz right now its not flowing- try a couple less syllables in a line for a second see where your most comfortable and tailor your rhymes to that... 1
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09-30-04, 12:20 AM | #3 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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IP: 0B9B 2D4B
yea....had to do it quick then throat was dry..didnt help lol...gonna redo it
but not till tomarrow....thanks for tha feed
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09-30-04, 12:55 AM | #4 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Hahaha this was pretty good, but catch a breath..fam..lol U was spittin ......off at times but overall is was nice u gettin betta at the flow i love the beat man WestNia ish.....Man we got to drop collabs nice drop and it seemed like some of yo lines were stretched u try to keep hold on em it happened to me 2..lol
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09-30-04, 12:26 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
wow, nice track, damn, you were feeling yourself, i can tell with how you spit, quick and f**kin emotional, nice lyrics too, i was feeling this drop, good beat too, i would just say like these fellas did and slow down, but i know you probably couldnt help yaself, spitting about this corrupt industry shit...nice track,keep it up..
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09-30-04, 02:18 PM | #6 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 0046 B646
no flo....
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10-02-04, 04:53 AM | #7 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
flow is off and everybody you named including beyonce will own you wack and like hov said 'do you dudes listen to music or do you just skim through it' guess you still skimming through it
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