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Old 01-31-07, 02:07 PM   #1
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shits ill i tried sumthin new i dunno if im gonna add on to the ending or not it just sounded aight ot leave it like that. gimme sum responses n drop links pzzz


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Old 01-31-07, 02:45 PM   #2
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beats not bad.....voks a bit loud.......writing seems iight so far...mixings good aside from the lvls..........wild story so far...heh.......no doubt...sad ending
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Old 01-31-07, 06:42 PM   #3
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good looks man, actually ive tested the levels in a car system n everything is on point tho i was stressin that the vocals were too high but shit bumps in tha whip trust that.. drop linkss
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Old 02-01-07, 10:28 AM   #4
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p.s i posted feed onl ike 5 tracks so dont close this jimmy
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Old 02-02-07, 04:57 PM   #5
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beat is cool sounds like an eminem knock off
You kind of remind me of eminem except your delivery isnt as good


Lyrically you told a really good storyline.
Your delivery kind fo sounds like LE You have like no emotion if you can get your emotion up youd be one of the best on here
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Reminds me of Limited Edition on this track

nice beat

nice flow/delivery combo here

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Old 02-11-07, 02:51 PM   #7
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haha word he does osound like limited edition.......beat is ight but wat ruins the track is ur emotion so so monotone fo real ......lyrics is coo voice is ight the story is coo i think the vocals culda been better.....overallpretty coo track
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Old 02-11-07, 07:11 PM   #8
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Beats nice...

yeah sounds canadian...

flow and emotion is dope b..I like how you gave the story..it's not mixed gr8...n u shudnt spit over the hook man...

it's decent...a few twerks will make it alot better
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