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Old 02-26-07, 10:33 AM   #1
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hahaha sikeeee. my track got closed downf or not puttin my links soo uhhh

trips new joint and ikes new jiont i left feed for so dont close this jown n be faggish whoever duz that...

peep tha top one on my page

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Old 02-26-07, 06:04 PM   #2
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decent at best.......
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Old 02-27-07, 11:40 AM   #3
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nigga are u stupid? this is tha kid who wrote a song ABOUT being wack??? god y is 99.999 percent of RV got their face in tha next dudes crotch tryin to get respect... sorry but ur wack sir..
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Old 02-27-07, 02:22 PM   #4
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firstoff.....beat is risky....i find it annoying but i can see it maybe being catchy....but just annoying to me.....now that thats done.....

you found calm on the mic, i feel like the beat needs to be a tad louder you are above it too much....lyrics from what i heard were pretty good, the structer was nice....nice patterns in rhyme scheme.....the hook was lame....sorry but it was.....work on that seriously....your verses are pretty dag good tho.....some of your lines seem one or two words off from flowing real smooth.....not bad but i feel like it coulda been put together a little better....your presence is real nice tho quality wise......

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nigga are u stupid? this is tha kid who wrote a song ABOUT being wack??? god y is 99.999 percent of RV got their face in tha next dudes crotch tryin to get respect... sorry but ur wack sir..

LOL hahaha son it's somebody's opinion. I don't think you're that good. I said your track was decent at best. That's my opinion. and if you think I'm wack, ok? That supposed to make me feel bad? It's your opinion, and yours alone.

Move on kid. don't get emotional about everyone who doesn't like your shit. Will be a lot of crying if you do
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Old 03-01-07, 01:53 PM   #6
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are you tha white kid and if so dont even say tha n word again or ill have to give u smacking im not even leaving fucking feed until you tell me your tha black guy
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^ LOL.... canadians.... theyre soo funny... i guess they must not have any black ppl in canadia or sumthing... nigga is a word used in everyday conversation in tha great country of USA... its not disrespectfull... its like what up my nigga or awww this nigga is illl... even.. whered that nigga go with tha drinks? yea... soooo.... yeaa....canadians...
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peeped "pump dat bass"

bass is up there...like the beat

voice sounds good on the track

everything else was decent




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