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Old 10-27-04, 06:35 AM   #16
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I gotta story to tell.
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Old 10-27-04, 06:52 AM   #17
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I cant remember my first but heres and old one:

Lil' Miss K, the only way a boy will like you is if he's gay,
You're to me like Eminem is to Dre,
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Old 10-27-04, 08:44 AM   #18
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First bar I ever kicked? It went somethin' like this...
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I'll bust a freestyle// But after this I'ma go to the drugstore and head straight for the weed isle//
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Lol that shit was back when I was 12...
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Old 10-27-04, 10:32 AM   #19
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My first bar was one of my tightest..........

Its the return of this nigga wit rhymes, lines like broken glass, tear apart our limbs from your spiritual mind...

First song I ever made called "Light'n em Up"
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Old 10-27-04, 11:24 AM   #20
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Unfortunately i do not remember my first rhyme.
But my first time rhymin was in one of those AOL Freestyle chatrooms i dont know who on here goes to those but yea it was my first time and it was sposed to be all jokes ...so i battled some nigga in IM and he told me i beat him good and so i got this great Huge EGO started ..and started battling regularly in those rooms...


"I'll Put you on the back burner like ike did tina turna"
"any bitch wanna battle this chick lets get with this shit in this bitch"...

yea those were some of my first lines lmfao.. :/


but luckly i improved fuck the aol freestyle chats they are now blessed with people who were once like myself .. but u know..boards help you improve greatly.
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Old 10-27-04, 01:15 PM   #21
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mine was this
im a whyte boy that does rap not disco/
cuz im oreo dot mean i come from nabisco/

lol oreo since birth
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Old 10-27-04, 01:27 PM   #22
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uh oh, its zig zag, merkin' wanna be emcees like dey be a fag

i dont need any help doin shit to you, cuz every thing i say to you be true

lol
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Old 10-27-04, 07:05 PM   #23
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My first battle.. i had on this site... on july
I'll remove you with the delete key, he had to make up fake personals
His Played rhymes while my punches and disses come in military arsenals
Your lines are stretched up, lost points in your structure and your flow
He a flyweight, his rhymes still sucks and he signed up a long time ago
Say he a hurricane, he can't reach me cause im the highest mountaintop
Already this fake MC choking in the battle, get this nigga a cough drop
My words and lyrics has got your mouth so dry that you can’t even spit
I’m going to KO’ you like what Eminem did to Papa Doc and Lickety Split
I know that you be ghostwriting your verse, this kid trying to fool me.
Because if you can't look through your lines of rhymes, then M can't C.
This kid claim he a hustler, cause he smuggling to many porn pics.
Because it’s like I'm eating cereal, because this fruit is just trix
MC.CM keep saying he's dope, so I'm smoking him to get higher.
And that is why I'll be burning Cm, like throwing rulers in fire.

battleing Mc.CM
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Old 10-27-04, 07:06 PM   #24
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well the chorus 2 my 1st song (and i dont know how i remember) was summin like this:

"cause im fuckin crazy/
and im thinkin that just maybe/
come any closer/
ill proove whos the poser/
ill beat ur ass/
til theres nuthin left but a bloody carcass/
...."

i dont remember the rest :P
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Old 10-27-04, 07:10 PM   #25
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Against SPuL prolly.

I aint gonna look it up.
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Old 10-27-04, 07:11 PM   #26
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LOL

my first rhyme on my first site RB


NIGGA u suck.. and ya moma gave u rejection
This bitch is weights 100 pounds.. and thats after liposuction.
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Old 10-27-04, 07:33 PM   #27
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I be grabbing my gats and leaving you filled wit holes and all hollow/
after the first bar I knew you didnt spit so obviously you must swallow/

thats my first battle... lol, not to bad I guess.. could make it better
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Old 10-27-04, 07:42 PM   #28
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Ya I remember mine, and un like most it wasn't wack.....

To the asian kid in a battle: Silly little man from Japan, don't you know? i'm the champ... You can't beat me... I'm an allstar, your a rookie, so leave rap alone and go make another fortune cookie
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Old 10-27-04, 10:11 PM   #29
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Heres my first open mic... shit made me laugh when i looked it up

step up to the mic and tell your pussy ass to take a hike
im new in town, but im already the best around
i see a buncha shit goin down, the people need to hear my sound
i make lil babies cry and old people wanna die
some say im hot, some say im not
but they all wish they could flow like me, blow like me, get outta control like me
cuz u see ill bust a rhyme any time, hit you if you get outta line
the cops see me wit a blunt, yo girl sees me and i know just what she want
so dont try to front, and i won't try and stunt
if you do try shit ill get in your face, ill put you to disgrace, this isn't no footrace
so why you running, you ain't that cunning
i'll chase you down, til you run outta town
now im gonna let you go, ill just go flow some mo'
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