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Old 02-09-04, 11:30 PM   #1
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Two New Beats...

"Dreams Of The Moon"

"Royal Flush"

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Old 02-09-04, 11:36 PM   #2
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im lovin Royal flush Orpheus the other one is ill, but i could rip Royal Flush lol

nice shit keep it up
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Old 02-09-04, 11:38 PM   #3
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Old 02-10-04, 12:29 AM   #4
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Dreams of the moon -

The sample is not flowin with the beat really, it is but its not, and it sounds out of tune sorta. Thats a drum loop?

Royal Flush -

Same problem, i feel like you just throw a sample in with a drum loop. Iono man, good choice of drums and samples. But they are not flwoin together very well.

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Old 02-10-04, 12:34 AM   #5
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Old 02-11-04, 04:01 AM   #6
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Old 02-12-04, 09:57 PM   #7
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yea... dreams of the moon has a weird sound too it..its like tha sample is drunk or soemthin... drums could use some umph... the drum pattern as a whole could use some hype juice...i dunno...

royal flush.. kinda simple... crazy sax, the drum pattern sounds so bland though man... you gotta learn how to liven up those drums man...they sound too plain... so much more can be brought out...

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Old 02-12-04, 10:03 PM   #8
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Old 02-12-04, 11:01 PM   #9
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experiment man... get soem excitment going in em.. instead of the boom bap sound...
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Old 02-13-04, 04:20 AM   #10
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omg

moon , royal, banghra, surreal, the answer, aer alll sick..........


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Old 02-13-04, 01:07 PM   #11
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Dreams of the moon -

The sample is not flowin with the beat really, it is but its not, and it sounds out of tune sorta. Thats a drum loop?

Royal Flush -

Same problem, i feel like you just throw a sample in with a drum loop. Iono man, good choice of drums and samples. But they are not flwoin together very well.

.OnE.


^^^ i listened to them both... and i can't agree with sF more. the sounds are good... but they just do not go with eachother well.
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Old 02-13-04, 02:10 PM   #12
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Old 02-14-04, 04:23 PM   #13
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They're right

The Drums on these ae sub par. Boom Bap Boom boom b-boom Bap Soooooo generic.


Royal Flush
It's simple But I love it. nice work

Moon Thing
Same old basic drum. This screams Backpacker.

Good Beats, Learn how to chop the samples a little more rather than repeated loops and you'll be golden
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Old 02-14-04, 08:43 PM   #14
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