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09-15-05, 01:27 AM | #1 | |||||
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Looking back now I can’t believe how much was lost
because of stupidity and not believing the cost. The price one had to pay to save the most from infinite holocaust. No one really understands Lord, the price you had to pay all we really know is that we became free that day. Charging an innocent man, killing him on his own land What a people are we, to kill our savior God Almighty. To turn our backs and say there is no God, have you never felt that presence when your just simply awed? Posers and frauds try to emulate, while He just sits there and waits. He has an infinite memory, which serves up our doom because He remembers who put him in the tomb Increments of time pass by quickly as we all knows He’s coming back soon and swiftly. We see the signs yet we pay no homage, Nothing can prepare us for the barrage, no where to hide the unsaved are the lost cause Left behind to a dreadful fate, oh if they’d see the light, they’d see what I’d see, the pearly gate. I cry for the unsaved, condemned to a tragic eternity if they would just stop and listen they could be in God’s fraternity. Charging an innocent man, killing him on his own land What a people are we, to kill our savior God Almighty. To turn our backs and say there is no God, have you never felt that presence when your just simply awed? Posers and frauds try to emulate, while He just sits there and waits. He has an infinite memory, which serves up our doom because He remembers who put him in the tomb. Choir: I wanna be where I can see forever, up there with God and the angels singing Hosanna. Up there with everyone in their glory ever. This awesome manuscript told me this That we will see the Lord and our eyes will mist.
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09-15-05, 01:38 AM | #3 | |||||
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09-15-05, 07:57 PM | #4 | |||||
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uppin 4 some feed
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09-15-05, 09:45 PM | #5 | ||||
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Two links not one please..thank you
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09-16-05, 12:10 AM | #6 | |||||||
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not bad very insightfull........Keep postin man...
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09-16-05, 12:29 AM | #7 | |||||
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thanks uppin...
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09-17-05, 12:42 PM | #8 | |||||||
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Nice nice that was pretty ill i give it 7/10
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09-18-05, 07:49 PM | #9 | |||||||
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ye that was nice had good flow ill give it a 7/10
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09-18-05, 10:19 PM | #10 | |||||
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thankz ya'll uppin
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09-19-05, 04:20 AM | #11 | ||||||
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my verse(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209041)
this was nice but far fetch from the real truth Jesus ask god for a kingdom if you don't know none of god's blessings are free it was the price he had to pay to have his own kingdom, so look I'm not gonna ask god for a kingdome I may have to go through waht jesus did not me I'll chill on that bu tthe verse from the art for was very good you laid it dow i see no weaknesses maybe you can rhyme it a little bit more but you got your point across keep up the good work Last edited by shaft 26 : 09-19-05 at 08:34 AM. |
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09-19-05, 08:32 PM | #12 | |||||
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thanks for the feedback, i dont understand what your trying to get across with the kingdom aspect. Clarify if you want for me, would like to talk about it. Thanks. Uppin
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09-23-05, 09:21 PM | #13 | ||||||||
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Dont even bother, He's just being an idot...seriously ignore it that shit was good 8/10..... Pz |
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09-26-05, 12:36 AM | #14 | ||||
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this was good, flow was pretty good, structure was ok, topic was nice really liked that, vocab was ok too, keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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09-26-05, 12:37 AM | #15 | |||||
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thanks ya'll uppin one last time..
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