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Old 07-01-05, 02:49 AM   #1
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New love poem.

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ur eyes of truth lips of romance fell in love wit u wit no Second Glance Im still lovin u no matter wat ur Finance thinkin of us 2 being together wit ur head layin on my chest beauty smell of Zest wit u round im neva stressed u hellped me when i was on the bench depressed now again u helped me when it was needed from all the tears I bleeded ur the reson y i succeded


so watcha think of it ppl?
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Old 07-01-05, 10:34 AM   #2
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Thats real dope. alot of feeling. good job on emotion but needs work. ... keep em coming mayn..
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Old 07-01-05, 01:14 PM   #3
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Ight coo thx Legend.
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Old 07-01-05, 03:05 PM   #4
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cmon ppl im uppin for sum feedback.
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Old 07-18-05, 10:33 AM   #5
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shea. I'ma up this for you. and leave some feed when I drop. forgot to say.
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Old 07-18-05, 12:50 PM   #6
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Okay piece... actually very nice and brutal in its own way...
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