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Old 12-08-05, 03:07 PM   #1
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Talking Its Gonna Be Alright-Unf And Inter(We Had To Do It Again!!!)

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Hook:Some Girl/UNF
Verse 1:Intermental
Hook:Some Girl/UNF
Verse 2:B.Daniel
Hook:Some Girl/UNF
Verse 3:Intermental
Hook:Some Girl/UNF


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The Messenger-How I Do
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Old 12-08-05, 03:31 PM   #2
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intermental turn your vocals down, theres to much boom in your voice... I couldnt hear your verse because of that... UNF my god..... you came on this track and exploded on it.. its like you got better in over a day good shit man. This was a hot collab 9.5/10
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Old 12-08-05, 03:33 PM   #3
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Wow THx man I Aprreciate It A Lot...........
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Old 12-08-05, 03:57 PM   #4
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Ok allow me to break this down.


The very beginning was not all that great in my mind until some music started coming in. Then it progressively got better.

Internmental.. your 1st verse was good, you flowed nice w/ the beat and were on point but it sounded like you were huggin the mic.. Voice was very low and loud. Although sounding like this you 2nd verse was much better. I heard a good vocabulary on it and I enjoyed it.

B. / U.N.F. - I thought you sounded great on your verse. You came in strong and w/ the beat and followed through the whole way. Your vocab could have been more colorul but what you did came together rather nice. The think i liked least about hearing you was the Hook. Just got in the way of the giirls singing. Overall good verse dude.

OVerall - I thought this piece was very enjoyable. You were both on w/ the beat and flowing nicely which is good. I cant really complain about either parts except the part about internmental sounding a little off. Otherwise 8/10.... nice shit fellas.

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Old 12-08-05, 04:03 PM   #5
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i used that tupac sample before...haa


intro kinda longish


Inter...vocals louder than the beat...bring em down some


and the adlibs are as loud as the main vocals...crank them down even more

ur verse was pretty good though...was feelin it


B Dan...ur Ad libs durin the hook were too low...crank em UP

u sound very far away from my ears bro...Bring ur levels up some...u and Inter need to split the difference...that wudda be the perfect level


flow was good tho


pretty unique soundin track


not bad dawgs


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Old 12-08-05, 04:07 PM   #6
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Thx Dudes...Uppppppppppppppppp
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Old 12-08-05, 04:29 PM   #7
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Old 12-08-05, 05:29 PM   #8
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Old 12-08-05, 06:19 PM   #9
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unf turn ur adlibs up liek q said
intermental shit was a little too loud lyrics were cool flow was good i was feeling this verse
unf good lyrics flow is good u stay elevating lol voice is good did you hit puberty last night lol
chorus i liek it
intermental again came cool
alright cool song liked unfs adlibs on the trackl those were cool props on this track
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Old 12-09-05, 01:47 PM   #10
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Arghhh...You Always Make Jokes

But Thx For The Feed

Uppp............
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Old 12-09-05, 05:01 PM   #12
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thanks fo sho......LMAO at the sig u got...i love that
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Old 12-09-05, 05:31 PM   #13
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Yeah Koo....Uppp!
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Old 12-10-05, 05:24 AM   #14
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Old 12-10-05, 09:51 AM   #15
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damnnnn yo ! u got some SICK ass samples !!...lol

iight i told u on aim but....beat is NASTY bro....chorus is tight...1st dude...voice is nice but..ur quality hurts is...need more emotion..ur adlibs not real great..flow is ok..lyrics r nice..2nd dude..emotion is killer...u come in a bit harsh...lyrics r tight....flow is their...quality is decent..3rd verse...nice lyrics..flow is better here..multies r killin it man...need more emotion still tho..quality still bad...i like ur voice tho man....again...whoever did u samples is a GOD.....damn..

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