Its been running in my head. And most likely will be used for a song

Being Mean is meaningless
Specialy when Karma is schemin
Make you relive a scene as a victim
When you lived as the one who struck em
Fuck em'
if they struggelin and not wantin to lend a hand
Do you understand the hypocritcy of a man
Watch individual strands string into rope
To make you choke, for you philosphical quotes
freedom of speech is non-existent
Cuz you pay price if they listen
Commision for you lenchen when your convicted
For turning truth into truth in the booth
Watch them turn false into truth with a golden tooth
Ya pockets loose while theirs tight
short understanding but they live high
While you overseas the seas but ya mouth is dry
Try thirstin for a new birth on this earth
while you hunger for the first
Every verse is worst that you disperse
Except to the unknown listener
That feels your hurt


Just a quick keystyle might turn it into a verse on a 1 verse track. But jut jottin down. No struture. Juggelin concepts. Tell me wat ya think.


Im gonna go feed some tracks and drop da links Holla

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The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)

Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3209754

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246036

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Project List

The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)

Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.

I dont know how i really feel about this piece. in fact, i was so uncertain that i went and checked some of ya open mics in ya sig. by the way big ups on them. its obvious you have talent, but i took this as a bunch of random thoughts, which is explainable byt the fact that its a keystyle. the emotion in it was on track and it got your point across, i just feel you may have needed better word selection. an overall good drop
6.5/10

If you drop it on here as an audio, pm me the link and ill leave feed. just might need to hear it in the authors voice

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...Is to have Served Your Faction

Kinda hard to follow most of ya lines, but in over all respect to your past piece i can tell this wasn't really what was expected but then again its only a quick keystyle sorry for an inadequate feed but i feed according to effort.

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