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Old 05-07-08, 12:39 AM   #1
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"L.A. Dreaming"......1st Open Mic

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Verse 1
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-I'm L.A. dream'n on the beat when I speak about my residence-
-I was dream'n of Compton when Eric. B ran for President-
-Used to be a Nigga Wit a Attitude back in '88-
-Now niggas is trade'n in they Chucks for a pair of BAPES-
-But it was Cali on my mind, I guess I was Nas in his prime-
-'Cuz my 'L.A. State of Mind' kept me on my grind-
-Any way you slice it I had it doper than Nino.....-
-.....Brown nose'n up to me i'll have you smoked like a Casino-
-Fog everywhere I look, bad traffic, and sticky green-
-California license plates just so I can rep my team-
-But dont get it twisted........its not alotta of hate-
-I'm just clarifying who's real so you dont have to deliberate-
-You might as well exaunerate........me from candidacy-
-'Cuz I dont run wit you cats, just check my history-
-You niggas are a mystery..........I dont understand the logic-
-'Cuz this is not the draft, dude you can't dodge it-
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Old 05-07-08, 12:40 AM   #2
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Old 05-07-08, 05:06 AM   #3
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This is nice bro, I like the gentle word play in it, aswell as the real talk in the drop. Rhymes are decent, could be a few mor emutlis in it, bu tthey decent enough. Would of liked it to be a bi tlonger seen as I was enjoying the read.

Stay dropping that heat bro.
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Old 05-07-08, 05:49 PM   #4
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Pretty decent for a verse, but im not one to speak on the verses written unless its me giving feed on a audio, but props on the drop
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Old 05-08-08, 03:54 PM   #5
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Thanks for the feed yo.......uppin.......
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Old 05-08-08, 10:58 PM   #6
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good word play, felt more real than creative could have been a little longer,overall good read....7/10
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Old 05-08-08, 11:57 PM   #7
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Uppin..............
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Old 08-03-08, 10:22 PM   #8
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