aight...fairly weak, but...breakdown.

u aint even gotta spit/
i know that ya flows soft/
cause i just read ya name/
and i started to DOZE off/
^^^took four lines to punch, but it was pretty good. clever wordplay.
now if u think ur hard/
then i wanna see u run to heat/
so i can put a bullit in you /
the size... of mutumbo's pinky/
^^^this was fuckin weak.
man im waistin all this heat for nothin/
cause there is no sense of me EATIN this ENGLISH muffin/
^^^halfway decent...pretty good use of the muffin thing.


This faggit wrekons his spit kills, nahhhh, you dont know the meaning to ill,
Your wack script skills not mixing enough knowledge to create sick spills/
^^^halfway decent punch
Leaving this boy backless for ever for thinking he held a chance with that deposit,
Wackness emergency centre is that way!\/\/\/! i think you should go for a visit/
^^^good punch.
What was it? you'll kill me in 8, haha sit down for some time and learn to write,
Soon you'll turn to bite as your lot was shit, your acting like your spits are white!
^^^lol...clever. good.
Your rhymes are like lite sprite cause you'll never be wanted under the lime light,
Why think your tight? haha when your typing right maybe ill come for another fight/
^^^weak. doesnt even really make sense.
Your gonna have to recite and rewrite if you ever wanna be a known newb,
Cause your verses are like old books! not interesting to look through/
^^^good punch, and good point.

overall it was pretty weak, but doze got it.

vote: doze