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09-13-07, 01:06 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"Beach Chair" (NYC Remix)
IP: 919A D22D
BEAT: "Beach Chair" - Jay-Z
If life is like a beach chair/ Then to be fair/ When I reach there/ I'm going to feel the tingle runnin' through each hair/ To be there, to be free/ To be me/ To be Nick or NYC/ This it seems/ Of course is the question/ That is pressin' on my mind/ What kind of impression that I wanna have left in/ The people's minds, after I left them/ The lessons, become mine, and the tests then/ Get passed and then a pass on detention/ Gets you a passage but when/ People say your name then I call it an honorable mention/ Always been stubborn, my moms had to have the C-Section/ A blessin' it will be when we don't have to see sections/ Of society strugglin' with poverty and misdirection/ Keep makin' mistakes but somehow never learn the lessons/ Government stopped caring about the people, so let's start an insurrection/ Nobody has answers, everybody has questions/ It's time to take an eraser to racism and make corrections/ Not every minority deserves to go into State Corrections/ Let's correct ourselves and do something about corruption/ Let's stop aiming at the bottom of the food chain and get the ones above them/ The ones who booze and drug them/ Thinkng that making them lose makes them win, that shit is troublin'/ And sometimes I can't help but doublin'/ Over with laughter at these overwrought actors/ Carefully, they evolve like chameleon personality crafters/ Shape shifting again like snakes splitting their skin/ Nothing seems so heavenly as living in sin/ Nothing seems as easy as quittin' and givin' in/ But nothing can stop us if we decide to fight and LIVE again/ ------- As always, feedback def welcome...Hate or props...holla @ your boy. |
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09-13-07, 09:03 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 9204 9119
.....i like how u had the wordplay cause it made your lines smooth....the concept was there to....overall it was good.....8.5/10...~1~
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10-11-07, 12:48 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 30B6 8894
You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.
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10-14-07, 06:23 AM | #4 | |||
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Closed, Moved And Stored.
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