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Oakley 4 44.44%
Freeman 5 55.56%
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Old 02-15-04, 06:41 PM   #1
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Freeman Vs Oakley

IP: 40D6 EBC3

10 Lines...
Normal Voting Rules...

Checkin and drop as soon as possible...

Good luck...

Pz...
 
Old 02-15-04, 06:43 PM   #2
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Check...

Should be done in 10-15...

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Old 02-15-04, 06:43 PM   #3
Oakley
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check'd in
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Old 02-15-04, 06:55 PM   #4
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Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
 
Old 02-15-04, 07:30 PM   #5
Oakley
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Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion[size=1](sig)[size]
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...[size=1](sig)[size]
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Old 02-15-04, 07:34 PM   #6
Oakley
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Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
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Old 02-15-04, 07:43 PM   #7
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^^^y u post ur verse twice???

now to the battle.............this was an ight battle overall both came wit good punches and personals.......both stuctures were ight 2........but overall ma vote goes 2 Freeman as his punches hit just that lil bit harder......oakley ur verse was gd 2 but lacked 1 or 2 dope punches i loved personals by both......flow was good in each verse aswell n e ways nice battle yall and keep elevatin........
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Old 02-15-04, 11:56 PM   #8
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dont tell me to elevate...your the worlds worste....
thanks for the vote...

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Old 02-16-04, 12:08 AM   #9
.iLL.
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From: spokane
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Freeman

Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
so-so opener..
Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
lol, good comparison
Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
had a nice beginning, but kinda weak at the end..
Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
lol, nice bar here
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
ehhhh..weak..

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Oakley

Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
had a good idea at the beginning, but it seemed like you were just trying to find a word that rhymed for the 2nd line instead of giving it some thought..
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
not bad..liked the first line
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
ehhhh, played..
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
hmm..ok ok ..not bad..
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
nice bar, but doesnt really have a lasting punch for a closer..

Overall, this one I'd have to give to Oakley..he just came harder..both had great flow and nice creativity..dont get me wrong, this was a close battle, Oakley just impressed me more..n/j to both

Vote ~ Oakley (btw, im almost at poll vote dawgs, if it aint decided by then, i'll be back k..)
 
Old 02-16-04, 12:10 AM   #10
.iLL.
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Old 02-16-04, 10:36 PM   #11
Oakley
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Old 02-17-04, 01:44 PM   #12
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Uppin this...

50 Characters....

Pz...
 
Old 02-17-04, 01:46 PM   #13
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i think the battle was ight, Oakley had it on lock
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Old 02-17-04, 05:34 PM   #14
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Uppin this again...

Votes please people...

Thanks...

Pz...
 
Old 02-17-04, 05:51 PM   #15
menolin
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freeman
Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
not too bad, 5/10

Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
could of been worded better, 5/10

Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
not really a punch, 4/10

Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
again just filler, 4/10

Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
ok personal, 6/10


overall 25/50



oakley
Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
second line was good, 5/10

Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
nice wordplay, an wittyness, 7/10

This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
nice setup, didnt pull it off, 4/10

Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
not too bad, 6/10

And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
nice personal, best bar of battle, 7/10


overall 29/50


both y'all please dont be bitches an vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114714
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